No one to like except Mr. Fox. Narrator screws Mindy over far worse than Jerry or Sylvia do him. Sylvia is just plain stupid; Rachel is mean to everyone except Narrator. And it's too long.
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Anonymous02/02/16
Proof?
The male character is sterile and she is knocked up. What more proof do you need. She didn't get knocked up from sitting on a toilet seat.
She went first - then he went worst. Multiple women, multiple times. She was open, he was hiding because he didn't want to give her the ammo he had.
Then he falls in love (read lust) 5 minutes later to live rich and happy ever after.
Did the lawyer have anything to do with changing the prenup?
Or for that matter did he even know about it?
It's called tampering and would be enough that even if he avoided legal charges being disbarred is near certainty.
Most lawyers try to avoid doing blatantly illegal acts like that, well, at least the ones with a fair chance of being caught doing them.
It would be a pretty serious crime for 'dear old Dad' too.
Chalk it up to yet another implausibility of the story.
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Anonymous07/02/16
Only a mediocre story
The basis of the story was OK but it did get lengthy! Then he does what he despises her for doing! He uses Mindy. This conflicting morality sucks! ...And...about Jerry and
Ronnie! There should have been HUGE retribution for them interfering in his marriage! Some of the elements of this story were just not kosher.
hopefully it takes a long long time in appearing, TK U MLJ LV NV
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Anonymous02/06/17
28 Years Later?
You could of really made the story better by Rachel getting the cancer maybe 8 years later, with him selling everything, him going to look for Sylvia to forgive, to ask her to become his traveling companion and maybe friends with benefits.
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Don't like it much.
No one to like except Mr. Fox. Narrator screws Mindy over far worse than Jerry or Sylvia do him. Sylvia is just plain stupid; Rachel is mean to everyone except Narrator. And it's too long.
Proof?
The male character is sterile and she is knocked up. What more proof do you need. She didn't get knocked up from sitting on a toilet seat.
Pure Fantasy
She went first - then he went worst. Multiple women, multiple times. She was open, he was hiding because he didn't want to give her the ammo he had.
Then he falls in love (read lust) 5 minutes later to live rich and happy ever after.
do wonder
Did the lawyer have anything to do with changing the prenup?
Or for that matter did he even know about it?
It's called tampering and would be enough that even if he avoided legal charges being disbarred is near certainty.
Most lawyers try to avoid doing blatantly illegal acts like that, well, at least the ones with a fair chance of being caught doing them.
It would be a pretty serious crime for 'dear old Dad' too.
Chalk it up to yet another implausibility of the story.
Only a mediocre story
The basis of the story was OK but it did get lengthy! Then he does what he despises her for doing! He uses Mindy. This conflicting morality sucks! ...And...about Jerry and
Ronnie! There should have been HUGE retribution for them interfering in his marriage! Some of the elements of this story were just not kosher.
DEATH IS ALWAYS A ROAD BLOCK
hopefully it takes a long long time in appearing, TK U MLJ LV NV
28 Years Later?
You could of really made the story better by Rachel getting the cancer maybe 8 years later, with him selling everything, him going to look for Sylvia to forgive, to ask her to become his traveling companion and maybe friends with benefits.
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