Cousins Reunited

Sooo it was her he was with and now somehow she doesn't remember? You also should've been clearer that it was a man telling the story, until they actually had sex I was almost thinking it was a woman.

Good story, high potential, editor needed.

Good story. You need grammar, syntax and spelling help. You could be a top author, get an editor.

Their?

Try they're

Haven't read it - won't rate it

"Their is a possessive pronoun: I like their new car.
They're is a contraction of 'they are': they're parking the car.
There is an adverb meaning 'at that place': park the car over there."
Source: Apple's Dictionary App

My crusade continues.

Good start

Nice background, good start. Now explore her need for forced, rougher sex.