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by Oldbear6307/21/14

I really liked this

being in a simular situation. Very well done.
"I'll relish my affair whilst keeping you happy
Life feels complete
When I have you both"

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by JWren09/27/14

Reminds me . . .

Of the song "Torn between two lovers." There's a hunger and a greed which can only be satisfied by both partner and lover. Sharp and incisive view of the games people play.

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