The Girl Who Wasn't There Ch. 04

Wow Sue, _ More...More...Please!

This is really well written, and a enjoy to read...

Thank You.

Gay Kat.

I want Ginny and Frejas ability! Sex would be amazing!!!

surprisingly short

There is a big gap and ending yet. I can't wait. Well done Sue.

j.

The ending is coming

Yes, this was a short part but the concluding part is longer and shold be finished in a week or so.

Best read to date!

Great and refreshingly unique story line. I can't wait for the final chapter.
I have been reading Literotica for years, however, this by far the best yet! Thank.you for sharing it with us.

Albert

Awesome and a bit scary

Ginny sees life as a buffet and grab whatever she likes. She is nice about it though and very loveable. But I am not so sure about Mouse. She seems to be growing a bit too fast, and at the bottom of it all there is this skill to control others, Exactly what everyone who was ever bullied wants. Ginny is grunded, but Mouse was bullied for a long time without ever coming into her own, will she be able to resist the lure of it ?

Ah, well. I will know soon enough Ch 5 is just a click away ;-)

Wonderful story. Thank you.
VvV

Correct spelling

Areola is spelt this way. Not the way of seen the greater majority of you spell it. So can your editors double check their work.

@Randee: That is the correct spelling of areola, but

the correct spelling of 'spelled' is, well... 'spelled'. :)

nooo!

Sad cause i know there is only one more chapter.
I'm so wrapped up in these characters i could read about them for several hours more than i know is left in this story.

Fantastic as always ScattySue.

xo

spelled or spelt?

Actually spelt is also correct and used here in the UK.

Love the story so far Sue, although a bit sad the end is nigh.