Your writing stories needs lots of work. To much missing a just a short fuck story. Just like that slam dang thank you mam. He leaves u hear about a divorce and no follow up on the couple. The husband got screwed like most men who have a cheating wife but that works both ways women with children are left in poverty while the husband walks away. Men cheat more than women and for diff reasons.
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Anonymous07/22/14
Liked it
It happens a lot, probably more in America than elsewhere. 4*
I swear, the comments in this category are generated by an app that just randomly inserts the same words over and over. The husband in this story wasn't a "cuck." He didn't know his wife cheated, and when he found out, he divorced her! Isn't that what the anti-cuck crowd wants in a story? Divorce, murder and/or mutilation. They get off on it.
Now, as for my comments about the actual story, I gave this three stars. It's not bad for a first submission. Yes, there were some spelling/grammatical errors, but I've seen worse. It's nothing a decent editor couldn't fix with a brief once-over review.
There wasn't much to the plot. Pretty standard-issue theme about a plumber and a housewife. It was plausibly written, except for the ubiquitous eight-inch dick. Come on, writers, not every character in every story can have an eight-incher! My advice; leave out the statistics and just use words to describe people's features. It makes for a much more realistic portrayal, and gives the reader more room for imagination.
How a man brags how he destroy marriages....I know if it wasn't him, would be another, but he would come clean...Someday he will marry..If his wife cheat on him, will he forgive and understand?
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Anonymous07/22/14
re:swingerjoe
You're a fucking idiotic moron. One last paragraph mentioned the husband without any kind of background. The story was all about a scum self centered plumber and a cheating housewife. Not much of a story. Too many questions unanswered. Getting back to swingerjoe. Can you ever make a comment without attacking other readers? Is that how you get your kicks. We all know you're a cucky lover, leave it at that.
I disagree with the commenter who said that if the husband doesn't know his wife is cheating, then he's not a cuckold. I prefer to flip that around. Traditionally, cuckolds did not know their wives were cheating and, in the most basic definition, were unaware they they are not the biological father of their child.
Even from a purely "erotica" point of view, I find the stories about husbands who WANT their wives to cheat are a different kink than the stories where the husband either doesn't know or knows and hates it.
In other words, I think there is and ought to be a "hot wife" genre (the husband LOVES that the wife is screwing around, maybe even puts her up to it) and a separate "cuckold" genre (the wife LOVES that she's screwing around, and he's hurt, mad, and humiliated.)
Don
The missing part is how the husband eventually sussed her out. She was most likely a drunk and gave up on cleaning herself out after the numerous amounts of spunk she was taking. Dirty cow. Can't really blame the plumber - a persistent pretty slut usually gets her way - so the missing link is the husband. We know they divorced (deft, author) and no one's life changed to any great degree. Godam I think I have an idea for a story. I do love a good cuck story, and there's more good writing on this site than some commenters will allow. 4*
It was over long before you got there. But the bright side is you got to enjoy her tight married pussy that her little dick husband was cut off from. lol
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Anonymous07/30/14
controversial dilemma
My, my. You sure do stir up the critics.
Some good comments here. You have to ignore the riff-raff. I liked the story even though it was cliche.
English
You need to do better than this story
Your writing stories needs lots of work. To much missing a just a short fuck story. Just like that slam dang thank you mam. He leaves u hear about a divorce and no follow up on the couple. The husband got screwed like most men who have a cheating wife but that works both ways women with children are left in poverty while the husband walks away. Men cheat more than women and for diff reasons.
Liked it
It happens a lot, probably more in America than elsewhere. 4*
Cuckerotica?
I swear, the comments in this category are generated by an app that just randomly inserts the same words over and over. The husband in this story wasn't a "cuck." He didn't know his wife cheated, and when he found out, he divorced her! Isn't that what the anti-cuck crowd wants in a story? Divorce, murder and/or mutilation. They get off on it.
Now, as for my comments about the actual story, I gave this three stars. It's not bad for a first submission. Yes, there were some spelling/grammatical errors, but I've seen worse. It's nothing a decent editor couldn't fix with a brief once-over review.
There wasn't much to the plot. Pretty standard-issue theme about a plumber and a housewife. It was plausibly written, except for the ubiquitous eight-inch dick. Come on, writers, not every character in every story can have an eight-incher! My advice; leave out the statistics and just use words to describe people's features. It makes for a much more realistic portrayal, and gives the reader more room for imagination.
Bragging....
How a man brags how he destroy marriages....I know if it wasn't him, would be another, but he would come clean...Someday he will marry..If his wife cheat on him, will he forgive and understand?
re:swingerjoe
You're a fucking idiotic moron. One last paragraph mentioned the husband without any kind of background. The story was all about a scum self centered plumber and a cheating housewife. Not much of a story. Too many questions unanswered. Getting back to swingerjoe. Can you ever make a comment without attacking other readers? Is that how you get your kicks. We all know you're a cucky lover, leave it at that.
What is a cuckold?
I disagree with the commenter who said that if the husband doesn't know his wife is cheating, then he's not a cuckold. I prefer to flip that around. Traditionally, cuckolds did not know their wives were cheating and, in the most basic definition, were unaware they they are not the biological father of their child.
Even from a purely "erotica" point of view, I find the stories about husbands who WANT their wives to cheat are a different kink than the stories where the husband either doesn't know or knows and hates it.
In other words, I think there is and ought to be a "hot wife" genre (the husband LOVES that the wife is screwing around, maybe even puts her up to it) and a separate "cuckold" genre (the wife LOVES that she's screwing around, and he's hurt, mad, and humiliated.)
Don
Fine vignette.
The missing part is how the husband eventually sussed her out. She was most likely a drunk and gave up on cleaning herself out after the numerous amounts of spunk she was taking. Dirty cow. Can't really blame the plumber - a persistent pretty slut usually gets her way - so the missing link is the husband. We know they divorced (deft, author) and no one's life changed to any great degree. Godam I think I have an idea for a story. I do love a good cuck story, and there's more good writing on this site than some commenters will allow. 4*
Your right
It was over long before you got there. But the bright side is you got to enjoy her tight married pussy that her little dick husband was cut off from. lol
controversial dilemma
My, my. You sure do stir up the critics.
Some good comments here. You have to ignore the riff-raff. I liked the story even though it was cliche.
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