That made me as hard as a rock with pre-cum leaking out of my cock. Are you Gayle or Laura in this story? :)
For Chapter 3
Actually I'm "Tom", but Laura, Gayle, and Debbie are based on real people.
Lucky Man! Keep the chapters coming...
What a waste of a WAIST! Good story but several silly errors. Please proof read!!
Now I proof it three times, then wait a day and read it once more before submitting. Silly mistakes on my part, and nothing spell check would catch.
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Great story Vividlyyours....
That made me as hard as a rock with pre-cum leaking out of my cock. Are you Gayle or Laura in this story? :)
I can't wait...
For Chapter 3
LOL
Actually I'm "Tom", but Laura, Gayle, and Debbie are based on real people.
Lucky Man! Keep the chapters coming...
"...just where her small waste curved into them."
What a waste of a WAIST!
Good story but several silly errors.
Please proof read!!
I know!
Now I proof it three times, then wait a day and read it once more before submitting. Silly mistakes on my part, and nothing spell check would catch.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Fringe Benefits Ch. 02 or
More submissions by vividlyyours.