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Making Him Watch

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by Anonymous

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio07/24/14

Suggest another category

BDSM (Mistress, bondage), Fetish, Gay, Non-consent. But not LW. Capisce?

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by hindsight202007/24/14

Being a wife is not in the theme.

The theme here is masochism. He is turned on by pain and humiliation. The "M" in BDSM. Wrong category.

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by frontlinecaster07/24/14

As long as ftds is allowed to put his rape fantasies and guys like deyaken, mikoli and stang are allowed to put their snuff stories here no one in this category has any right to complain about categories.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

frontlinecaster

you and this author should get some help or better yet do the world a favor and read a book on aids you dipshits.

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by frontlinecaster07/24/14

Read a book on AIDS?

What does that even mean? How is that an insult? I have read a lot of books about a lot of subjects, which is more than I can say for the average anonymous commenter here. As always, commentary from the anons proves to be completely worthless and this site would be a better place without it.

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by calclover07/24/14

Believe it or Not Frontline

This site would be far better off without whining little girls like you bitching about anonymous comments.Frontline get a grip.Is your real name frontline? Thought not.So you are just as anonymous as myself and everybody else here.Lastly everyone including you are entitled to an opinion in regards to what is posted here.Why dont you comment on the story instead of the comments.As for this story it probably does belong in another category so I dont vote and will never read this author again Simple isnt it frontline.

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by frontlinecaster07/24/14

Aww, waa! I pissed off another btb fan by pointing out that this section is completely broken because no one is willing to actually categorize stories. And that this whole site is broken because it allows people too lazy to put in a user name and give an e-mail address to spew vile, hateful crap all over the stories.

The difference, Calclover, is that I have a user name my comments can be attributed to. I have a way to be contacted, so I can't go into a story and threaten to rape or murder the author the way the anons here do. I have the balls to stand behind my opinions on stories and not be a worthless little coward who threatens violence because he didn't like some porn he read online.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

a fake name and a fake email just make you a 0

every reader, whether using and assumed ID or not, is just that, a reader of that story, no opinions are worth more than anyone else. Cucks are a fetish in real life and as such belong in the fetish section. Women who are mentally ill, and their mentally ill husbands/boyfriends are erotic just sick

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by looking4it07/24/14

Totally the wrong category on just about every issue of this story.

Frontlinecaster, you're a moron...just saying.

One of the few times I wish there was a zero or negative score rating.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

This is a gay-bondage story and has NO business in LW

In addition it's a BAD gay-bondage story! It's very poorly written in present tense.

and for those who constantly bash FLC, why not simply ignore her? That's what I do.

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by frontlinecaster07/24/14

Cuckolding is a fetish, yes. That's why it has its own section on this fucking site. If you don't like it take your violent revenge stories somewhere else.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

The good thing about girlfriends?

Is that they're cheap and easy to dump. WRONG CATEGORY! No loving wife here. Not even a wife. Please put this crap in the right category so no one needs to read it. This was simply horrible. I'm not even sure what the point was. He liked to watch? She was a bitch? Did you proof read this mess? No stars because even giving you one star would be too many.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

I'm with frontline

caclover needs to be banned from this site for his endless asshole comments (usually anonymous).

looking4it is one of the twattiest turds on the site. another cunt that needs to disappear.

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by calclover07/24/14

re:I'm with frontline

Maybe you should be banned from this site for being a complete moron Once again an idiot who says absolutely nothing in regards to the story but can sure spew vitriol when it comes to comments..Anon.Did you read story? Can you read? I truly believe that you and frontline deserve each other.Maybe you can date?

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by calclover07/24/14

BTW I'm with frontline

Have checked the scores for this mess.Im not the only one who thinks this was a poor effort.And for your information since you did not read the story I hold no ill will towards the autbor.Just think his story would do better in another genre

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by Lickideesplit07/24/14

Agree w/Anon 'no business in LW'

Also ViO and Hindsight. The story has NO wife, it IS Gay, BDSM, and perhaps worst, is poorly written!

Folks, the Comments are for the story or the writing (or, of course, both). They are NOT for potshots at each other. Take that to the Forum (if you MUST!)

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by frontlinecaster07/24/14

This story belongs right where it is. Govern the shit you btb guys get to pass off here these days there is clearly no category here that means a damn. So just shut up and deal with how badly you've all fucked up a category that was meant for one particular fetish. The fetish this author wrote about.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

Belonged in Fetish

The first paragraph was a fetish set-up, not LW. Maybe BDSM.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

1

1 says it all

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by RealDoc07/24/14

Quit Now

Don't waste your time. Just move on.

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by impo_5807/24/14

Less than 1 *...

He is adult and if he likes that, he can do it...But we don´t have to like it...I would understand if she was really a mistress, but his girlfriend...A sad story...

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by Anonymous07/24/14

Hated it

Did not like the style of writing or the content.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

My 2 Cents

yes sir this sure beats the stories banned by the powers that be here - a tender love story NOT

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by frontlinecaster07/25/14

Tender love stories that got banned here? You mean all the snuff porn masquerading as 'serious' revenge stories so bitter old men can sit around and jerk off to thinking about murdering their bitch ex-wives? Yep, that is healthy compared to just some people who have a fetish here.

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by Anonymous07/25/14

re:frontlinecaster

We all know you're just a cucky, so don't knock others for having a different opinion of what erotic means. You're a scum bag of the worst kind, so do all of us a favor and shut the fuck up. Read one paragraph of this trash, stopped reading, went to the bottom line and gave this dreck what it deserved. One Star.

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by Anonymous12/08/14

I enjoyed it...

Years ago my then girlfriend and I got a little wild when a buddy of mine stopped by. Mike was young than us and a virgin as it turned out. We were drinking Tequila shooters, my girlfriend loved Patron and she was getting hammered. The conversation turned to sex, my GF instigated it and she soon made it uncomfortable for my friend Mike

The instant she learned he was a virgin, she accused him of being gay and he protested, but not loudly. She said he'd have to prove it and of course, we were wondering just how. Amber told Mike to pull his cock out and if it got hard when she showed him her tits, he wasn't gay. I though I was going to have a heart attack , I was so excited! She was relentless until he pulled his semi hard cock out, about 4" long in that state with a nice big plum head! She looked at it and talked about it, then pulled both her blouse and then bra off. Her tits were (and still are) incredible. Not big, about baseball sized, but a nice droop to the bottom and the nipples pointed 45 degrees upward! Better yet, though she had large pink and puffy areola's, her nipples are enormous! We started going out because I'm a nipple freak and couldn't take my eyes off hers. They are not just 3/4" long, but THICK!

Mike's cock stuck up straight as an arrow! It was so hard it quivered with his heartbeat and I'd say though fairly thin, he was about 5" long. That cockhead though...wow! She let him look for a minute or so then put her shirt back on minus the bra. He was going to put his cock away but she told him no, the test wasn't over. After going to the bathroom and then getting us more shooters, Amber came back in to check and sure enough, he was 'mostly' soft again. She told him part II of the test was about to begin. She made me stand beside him and pull my own cock out. I'm about 7.5" long and thick, about 6" around. My cockhead isn't anything like Mikes' but I saw his eyes light up when I pulled it out, hard as a rock! We both watched as he stared at my cock, his own dick starting to ride until again, it was quivering with rigidity. I just stood there until we saw pre-cum starting to bubble out and run down the sides.

Amber asked if he'd like to lose his virginity and in shock, he eagerly nodded yes! She told him he could fuck her, but he had to suck my cock first, to completion! I wasn't sure if I could handle that but I saw his enthusiasm when he agreed. It was incredible, I stepped forward to where he sat on the couch and he leaned forward, instantly taking my cockhead into his mouth and running his tongue around it. His eyes were closed and he began to run his mouth up and down my pole slowly. It was soon apparent how much he was loving it! His mouth knew what it was doing and he swore afterward, it was his first time sucking, and I was getting closer to cumming. Amber was staring in excitement and stripped nude to stand beside me while she watched. Her hand drifted down to her shaved pussy and started stroking gently. By this time Mike had his hand wrapped around my shaft and was building speed when I saw him begin to hunch and his cock started spewing out his nutload while he sucked. He had yet to even touch it! It splattered again my legs and behind me and all over him, the load was monsterous. It set both Amber and I off and when I started shooting my load, he locked his lips around the head and swallowed every drop.

Mike sat back in exhaustion and embarrassment. I stood there and watched him and Amber sat down beside him to reassure Mike how much fun it was. She must have made him feel better because I saw him start to look at my cock again where a strand of cum was starting to drip. Before I could do anything about it, without being asked, he leaned forward and licked it off, then began sucking again. Damn, I felt my cock start to become rigid again!

If I thought he enjoyed it the first time, I was in for a treat the second. Mike poured his heart and soul into sucking out another load. And when I began to spew into his mouth, I saw his cock was rock hard and he was jacking it frantically! After giving him his second mouthful, he continued to hold my cock in his mouth until he'd jacked himself to completion! He sat back and we watched him savor the taste of my cum. Amber was in love with watching my cock being sucked.

Our little experiment turned into a long term thing. Amber promised Mike she could have her pussy everytime he stopped over, which became everyday, as long as he didn't cum while sucking me off. He finally made it and it turned out he'd jacked off before coming to our house! I was able to watch him not only lose his cherry when he sunk it into her doggy style and shoot about 10 strokes later, I watched him suck it all back out.

After that Mike was my cock slut. He never did fuck Amber again because he'd lost his cherry and the offer was over. But that didn't stop him from coming by and as soon as he walked in the door, dropped to his knees and offered me his mouth. He was making me cum two or three times per day and Amber became tired of watching. She moved on, a better job opportunity came up out of state and since I owned my own home, I stayed and she moved on. I heard she was married with three kids and had put on quite a lot of weight to the point no one recognized her when she visited.

What happened to Mike? He moved in with me and we told people he was renting. Amber never mentioned our relationship so no one knows. But he sleeps in my bed and still sucks me whenever I need it. He's become my little sex slave, doing whatever I want. Usually he sucks me dry 3X per day, sometimes more and I make him jack off for me so I can watch him squirt that load across the room! One of my favorite things is to make him jack off, squirt his load and then jack off immediately again. I once made him cum 6X that way, promising him he could suck my sperm out and hold it in his mouth if he'd keep going. It was soft the last 3X but still had some tiny spurts left. I love it when his cock is hanging and sore.

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