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Ode on a Grecian's Urn

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by ishtat07/22/14

"Old on a Grecian urn"

You could leave out 'her smooth', 'his, 'her proud' and 'now' without losing meaning.

'White hair' conveys the sense of time without the need for 'now.' There you are , a 35% trim - feel free to ignore.

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by Oldbear6307/22/14

Was startled by

Hellenic Hooters - 5'd

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by Ashesh907/22/14

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a Timeless look on the Impermanence of the Human condition !! 5-ed.

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