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Holiday with My Best Friend

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by Anonymous07/25/14

Good start

It seems a little rushed and you should always make sure to double read what you type (dark brown eyes, most beautiful green eyes). I look forward to more.

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by Anonymous07/25/14

Nice short story

Often adventures like this happen when alcohol reduces inhibitions.

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by Anonymous08/13/14

awesome

Write more!!! I like it

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