Not bad Alittle rushed but keep writing. I want to be your uncles friend! Lol
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Anonymous07/24/14
keep writing enjoyed and I wish I were your uncle
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Anonymous07/24/14
I'm an uncle and was a mechanic retired now at 62
Who cares about grammar and punctuation: I wish my niece would do that to me…..
I'm wanking off now thank you _alover
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Anonymous07/24/14
Considering she's never had sex before, I'd say she's done a pretty good job, seriously it's hurtful and mean. She's also 18. I love the story, I hope you write more
I like the premise, but wish that you had taken your time and developed things a bit... like creating an environment to engender a strong loving bond between the two, before they began to experiment with the merging of the emotional, sensual, and erotically physical. It's not a bad story, in fact has the potential for being a classic, were it not so abrupt . Of course, if you were merely going for a quick little stroke story, congratulations, you attained your goal.
Like some others, I would probably enjoy being your uncle, though in my case it would likely have to be 'great uncle' . I would enjoy reading more of your stories, if you would see fit to notify me as they come in to Literotica.
Thank you for this one,
-Wylde
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Anonymous07/25/14
me and my uncle "Dan" fucked and sucked all over my aunt's newly purchased second-hand salon shoppe. Thanx _alover, for bringing the memories back!!
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Anonymous07/26/14
love it
I'm 18 so I know how it is.I may not be a.virgin no more but u did good! I really hope u write more!
I have a auto shop
Not bad Alittle rushed but keep writing. I want to be your uncles friend! Lol
keep writing enjoyed and I wish I were your uncle
I'm an uncle and was a mechanic retired now at 62
Who cares about grammar and punctuation: I wish my niece would do that to me…..
I'm wanking off now thank you _alover
Considering she's never had sex before, I'd say she's done a pretty good job, seriously it's hurtful and mean. She's also 18. I love the story, I hope you write more
Take your time
I like the premise, but wish that you had taken your time and developed things a bit... like creating an environment to engender a strong loving bond between the two, before they began to experiment with the merging of the emotional, sensual, and erotically physical. It's not a bad story, in fact has the potential for being a classic, were it not so abrupt . Of course, if you were merely going for a quick little stroke story, congratulations, you attained your goal.
Like some others, I would probably enjoy being your uncle, though in my case it would likely have to be 'great uncle' . I would enjoy reading more of your stories, if you would see fit to notify me as they come in to Literotica.
Thank you for this one,
-Wylde
me and my uncle "Dan" fucked and sucked all over my aunt's newly purchased second-hand salon shoppe. Thanx _alover, for bringing the memories back!!
love it
I'm 18 so I know how it is.I may not be a.virgin no more but u did good! I really hope u write more!
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