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A Perilous Journey Ch. 13

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by FormerReader07/24/14

Hand and a half sword...

You sir know your medieval weapons. it is fitting Brion uses what is the best sword Europe ever produced for all-around capability. Looking forward to the next chapters.

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by Anonymous07/26/14

wanted to read it

But it is formatted as centered text so i would have to slide each line back and forth on the cell phone. oh well. i hope it is a good story anyway. i did not rate it at all instead of giving it a one.

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Thank you and I apologize...

Thank you Former Reader, I have been interested in medieval weapons for years. I find their evolution and various uses fascinating and I'm boggled by how many different skills were needed for all of them. It all makes modern weapons seem so easy to master, lol. Also I'm sorry for the Center formatting. I submitted a Word document with Justified Left formatting. I don't know how or why it shifted when it was converted. I'll ask the moderators about correcting it.

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