Tied and Tormented By Ashley

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

Terrific to see a femdom story that isn't the typical Mistress with a groveling male. Very believable and erotic, with a sharply drawn and playfully wicked female character. Hope you write more.

Admittedly this is a femdom story that isn't the typical Mistress with a groveling male. However, not very believable, even though highly erotic, with a sharply drawn and playfully wicked female character. I would love to read what happens after "he" is released, and what retaliation, if any, he takes.

Keep those stories cumming.

Good one

Good one, If i was gonna be tormented, I'd want it to be done by Ashley

Nicely done

Great teasing story, I liked it a lot, especially since it doesn't utilize the typical femdom setup. A little more character development and this can be the start of a great series. Keep going.

As to the last anon comment: I completely fail to see the reason for hurting that girl. What is going on in a brain to build up so much hate? If you don't like femdom or teasing stories, why do you read them?

great work

write some more please

Awesome story!

I went right to you page to see if you wrote any more!! Please continue, this was amazing and very original. Thanks!
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Thanks for the feedback

I posted another story but the admins haven't approved it yet.

Nice start

Not enough post orgasm torture stories on here. Since you are writing from the victim's perspective, include more detailed descriptions of what he is feeling, both physically and mentally.

Great story

Please continue this, there aren't many stories like this on here and this was one of the best I've read.

Nice work

Please continue this story