Well, it IS my first attempt at this, so if you were at least curious enough to come back and see if there was any promise in the story, then found you were responding to it more, morlan, I am glad. I have already submitted the next chapter, hopefully it will be approved and then we will see if I hold your interest. Honestly, I know WHERE I want to go with this, I just am not sure HOW I'm gonna get there yet - stay tuned! :)
Great story more and more chapters please as they develope their lust. Im enjoying yhis as i have a breast lactation and impregnation fetish. Lets hope he cuckolds her further and impregnates her. Thx for a great read
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Anonymous07/28/14
Good Writing
Not great, but good. You seem shy about what you want your characters to do next. A reluctance brought on by society, you want them to be nasty but you can't release them just yet. I hold out hope for you, free them and let the sex begin. lol
I love the tone of this. Very hot and naughty. Just wish there had been a back story so we know characters better. That's one hungry Daddy! Looking forward to more!
Should I now go back and write the prequel, as it were, to give you all the back story? I hear what you're saying, and am trying to figure out how to please you guys (at least where I agree with your feedback - sorry, the characters will not be devolving into nasty/slutty, that is not appealing to me)... If you think an interruption of the action here is warranted, where I can flesh out the back story, please let me know, and I will work on it! Again, thanks for the feedback, everyone! :)
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Anonymous07/29/14
hot
this story has been a fantisy of mine for years. i have longed to fuck my daughter since her tits started to show. every time she kisses me i have to go jackoff.
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Anonymous07/30/14
It is a duty.......
I have been thru this when my daughter was staying with me as her husband was having a research at Indian Ocean. I loved your story and it sure bring back memories and as I send this message, my daughter have just reading it and down on her knees.................
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Anonymous07/30/14
Just amazing
Let me start off by saying, this is an amazing story, i loved it from start to finish, i really hope to be able to read more of this in either a prequel or another sequel, feeding daddy is for sure in my top 5 favorite sex stories, thnx.
Sorry about that, JWren, you are absolutely correct, I mixed up the panties thing... Initially "I" was wearing them, then when I was doing an edit, I decided to dispense with them, but then forgot to edit out the next reference. My apologies!!
English
I loved this story soo much,,,probably as I have a breat feeding fetish,,please keep writing
Better
I was not sure what to think after the first chapter, but now it is getting fun. It will be interesting to see where you go with your story now.
Thank you!
Well, it IS my first attempt at this, so if you were at least curious enough to come back and see if there was any promise in the story, then found you were responding to it more, morlan, I am glad. I have already submitted the next chapter, hopefully it will be approved and then we will see if I hold your interest. Honestly, I know WHERE I want to go with this, I just am not sure HOW I'm gonna get there yet - stay tuned! :)
More chapters plz
Great story more and more chapters please as they develope their lust. Im enjoying yhis as i have a breast lactation and impregnation fetish. Lets hope he cuckolds her further and impregnates her. Thx for a great read
Good Writing
Not great, but good. You seem shy about what you want your characters to do next. A reluctance brought on by society, you want them to be nasty but you can't release them just yet. I hold out hope for you, free them and let the sex begin. lol
Good, but
I love the tone of this. Very hot and naughty. Just wish there had been a back story so we know characters better. That's one hungry Daddy! Looking forward to more!
Should I go back...?
Should I now go back and write the prequel, as it were, to give you all the back story? I hear what you're saying, and am trying to figure out how to please you guys (at least where I agree with your feedback - sorry, the characters will not be devolving into nasty/slutty, that is not appealing to me)... If you think an interruption of the action here is warranted, where I can flesh out the back story, please let me know, and I will work on it! Again, thanks for the feedback, everyone! :)
hot
this story has been a fantisy of mine for years. i have longed to fuck my daughter since her tits started to show. every time she kisses me i have to go jackoff.
It is a duty.......
I have been thru this when my daughter was staying with me as her husband was having a research at Indian Ocean. I loved your story and it sure bring back memories and as I send this message, my daughter have just reading it and down on her knees.................
Just amazing
Let me start off by saying, this is an amazing story, i loved it from start to finish, i really hope to be able to read more of this in either a prequel or another sequel, feeding daddy is for sure in my top 5 favorite sex stories, thnx.
daddys babby girl wants his babby It willbesoon
she needs everything fucked
Confusion
Lust will not be denied, even if there is initial confusion and doubt. But be careful with your facts: was she wearing panties or not?
Sorry!
Sorry about that, JWren, you are absolutely correct, I mixed up the panties thing... Initially "I" was wearing them, then when I was doing an edit, I decided to dispense with them, but then forgot to edit out the next reference. My apologies!!
Well done!
This is great pls keep writing. Although I must again point out what a moron her husband is! At least she has her daddy :)
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