I agree that the chapters are too short, but everything moves along well..... looking forward to 3-somes....SO many combinations possible!! LOL Also watching for HIS Mom to let her submissiveness shine through!!
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Anonymous09/05/14
OUTSTANDING!!!
I am really looking forward to the next chapters. Please keep writing. Thank you.
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Anonymous10/02/14
It is truly a shame that you either stopped this story or haven't been able to finish it
It is excellent and very unique. You will find an instant following if you carry this fine story on.
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Anonymous12/23/14
needs finished
Please keep writing this storyline?
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Anonymous06/27/16
Great story, shame no update in years
I really loved this chapter and the preceding ones. I'd have liked the story to continue to evolve.
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Please try To Make the chapters longer
I enjoying the chapters though I find then to be a bit short .i hope
You can extend them.
Proof Read!!!!
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Good development.......
I agree that the chapters are too short, but everything moves along well..... looking forward to 3-somes....SO many combinations possible!! LOL Also watching for HIS Mom to let her submissiveness shine through!!
OUTSTANDING!!!
I am really looking forward to the next chapters. Please keep writing. Thank you.
It is truly a shame that you either stopped this story or haven't been able to finish it
It is excellent and very unique. You will find an instant following if you carry this fine story on.
needs finished
Please keep writing this storyline?
Great story, shame no update in years
I really loved this chapter and the preceding ones. I'd have liked the story to continue to evolve.
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