All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 07'

Please continue!

I like the storyline a lot!

Don't keep us waiting too long!

More, please!

Absolutely fantastic story please with sugar on top write more.

AMAZING!!!!!! I hope you continue this story and write new ones! Well Done !

Pile of smoking shit. The worst.

Loved it. Here's another storyline that needs a new chapter please.

Sci-fi for the next chapters. Thanks for writing and sharing

I would really love for you to come back to this story and do a few more chapters. After all you got he's PT back to work but you didn't have him go see her yet. and there is also the thought of him and Jen. Now that he has spent the night with her is she amune? Or was it only temperary because they never parted after the sex? There is so much still to explore. His Daughter fantisizing about him when she came to visit and his son in law fantisizing about another woman that he has already had. Please come back to this story line.

Hoping you continue with new chapters, to either continue (which I'm very much hoping for), or to give it a proper ending.

And yet you read seven chapters. Oh well. As Forrest Gump was wont to say, "Stupid is as stupid does."

@ m_storyman_x, I hope you will return to at least give us and ending.

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You check it as you go, then you check it when finished, then you check the preview AND YOU STILL SCREW SOMETHING UP!

@ m_storyman_x, I hope you will return to at least give us an ending.

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This plot is different and good. The sex is also, as usual, hot. But as usual there is so many faults, both logical, in grammar and spelling. Please let someone read through it properly.

And in such a diverse story as this it would be nice with some other diversity aswell. Its big C's and DD all over everything. 😉 They even grow during the story some time.

Please come back and add to this storyline, this is great!

Thanks for a great story please continue with the story to a good conclusion.

Don’t worry about the few errors in the stories I don’t read this site for grammar and punctuation!!

Thanks

This is an awesome story, please continue and finish it. I think that he should have a round with his daughter and daughter in law at the same time.

This story seems to be incomplete ...? A fun read despite the numerous errors (grammar, missing words, etc.,)

You are an excellent writer, but, you never finish a story

I love what you've done so far, but there's a lot more story to tell. Dropping it in the middle, as you have, is ... frustrating for a reader. More, please!

Finish it please!!

Great story! Don't leave us hanging please!!