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Succubus Summoning 209

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/27/14

Another great job

Great job yet again, and loved to see Carnie back again! Looking forward to see where you take Phil and co next!

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by Tarotb07/27/14

Phil is finally learning! :)

Ok, it wasn't a 'fair' fight, but it was still a challenge and it's nice to see he's finally able to defend himself, a little... for all the good it does him.
Nonetheless, this was a great chapter; thanks.

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by joshmose07/28/14

Yes!

Good to see you are back with the story line. Thanks.

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by Anonymous07/28/14

AMAZING

I love all of it , this story was extremely amazing , please hurry and do more.

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by Ternom07/28/14

Amazing part 209!

Hi, I already mentioned my comments on the blog, so the final part here...

It's weird to feel sympathy for a demon but I say that Jack Stone got what he deserved for hurting Verdé like this. How un-gentleman like behavior.

One down, three to go :)

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by Anonymous07/28/14

another great ch :-)

thank you for another great chapter :-)

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by CharlesCameron07/29/14

Well done Phil!

Well done Phil - to become what you don't wish to be IS a form of death! (and will not save your miserable hide - as shown, for example, in 'A Succubus for Christmas'.)
"This above all things, to thine own self be true. Thou canst not then be false to any ... Demon" ;)

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by Anonymous07/29/14

The Fate Of Emma Brennan

M.E.H. You sly dog....that was Emma Brennan's head that was delivered to Nyte!

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by Anonymous07/31/14

Been with u since the beginning

I've remember when I first came across this series and u only had the first two chapters out ever since then I've been hooked and read every story you have posted on this site your an amazing author and this is my favorite series that you have written my only complaint is that I wish u would post a little more frequently on the SS series but I understand u need a break sometimes jus keep up the amazing work my friend and hopefully Phil will make it thru till the end and not be consumed by his own power....or succubi lol. Oh and BTW I was gonna tell u I love how u intertwine your stories as well as how you portray the different forms of succubi keep up the outstanding work my friend and I'll be looking forward to your next entry as always -DK

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by Anonymous07/31/14

Manyeyedhydra is BACK

Super hot. We got to see a student finally get loved to death. Awesome! This reminded me of the very first story where Phil's friend got taken, and I want to see more of that. It makes Phil's situations even more intense since you know what they can really do.

L'mactia is one of the most sensual creatures I have ever seen. I almost wanted her to ended Phil's life, but then again we can now do it all over again ;) PLEASE make more demons like her!!!

Best of the Succubus Summoning 2 series, and maybe best of the first?

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by GigglingGoblin08/01/14

Gotta be honest, I'm not sure why the Sloth demon didn't help its master. I get that demons are coldhearted and merciless, but isn't the idea of this setting that contracts, well, work? :P

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by Blufoxshdw08/04/14

L'maticia

Ive grown into a big fan of your stories and the spider demon is thus far one of my favorite characters.

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by Rtiowe08/04/14

Nyte

Nice catch about Emma Brennan!

And nice writing about Emma Brennan too. Reminds me of Buggeritall, but better and more subtle (but probably too subtle; it's hard to expect readers to remember minor details such as hair color and style, especially after months of time). A clever way to develop some characterization and subvert some expectations.

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by Anonymous08/05/14

this was fucking amazing cant wait for more

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by Warfolomei08/06/14

Fun !

Even though it's quite creepy every time.
Was that a Marlon Brando reference ?

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by Hurbster08/08/14

Excellently written as always. Buuuuuuuuut - can be summed up as 'demons win - the end'. That's your established style.

Nice to see you back and two fingers up at those bastards who were giving you hassle earlier.

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by Anonymous08/15/14

Fantastic installment, as always. I like how you're keeping up the suspense related to Phil. :)

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by Anonymous08/17/14

Bravo!

Delighted to see another chapter in a short time! Definitely enjoying the new variety in lust daemons; the fungal style is quite novel. And we continue to learn more about the daemons' strange world, to follow Phil through his adventures, and keep lusting for his Succubi. :-)

More, please!

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Most excellent as always.

Hey Hydra, any chance Jack Stone might actually survive this? He seems like a very likable character in some ways. I think he would be a fun character to keep around and develop on really. That way if he dies later it means a lot more to us readers. But like always , great story.

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by Anonymous08/27/14

I agree with Hurbster and Blackandwhiteknight

Let some of your mortals live so we can see them come back. People don't relate to demons that are all powerful. People relate to the mortals in your stories that just keep dying. You never get any fun mortals that stick around for long and it would be nice to get some characters that stick around other than Phil, who has no personality. You could kill off Phil and replace him with another character just the same and wouldn't it make any difference.

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by AJ_Watson08/28/14

As good as ever

I vividly remember reading Hookah'ed the day you posted it and your latest posts continue to be of great quality. Long may it continue sir!

As for the question of mortals always losing, to some extent of course it's a matter of taste. For me though, a major part of the allure of succubi is in the dabbling with powers beyond human control so I think the frequent demise of their hapless suitors is perfect. Not that you need any advice from me...

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by RunRunRunRunaway08/31/14

So do we get to see the chapter where phil first meets Carny? I don't remember that happening, or Carny and Rosa taking out a pub full of hooligans

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by manyeyedhydra08/31/14

@RunRunRunRunaway

Phil first meeting up with Carny happened in a standalone story. It's called "A Night at McHooligans" and is also up on Literotica. You should be able to find it from my profile.

- manyeyedhydra

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by Anonymous09/07/14

Can't wait!

Love these stories. Hope your next comes soon.

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by Anonymous09/14/14

summoning 209

Very interesting chapter well written with lots of loose ends that just beg to be finished off in other chapters.

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