But you would benefit from using an editor - there are bits where it doesn't read well. :-)
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Anonymous08/02/14
Another nice read!
I liked it a lot. I think your first story was sexier, in my humble opinion. I hope you add chapters to that one. I gave this 4 stars tho. Thanks for sharing!!
j
English
Nice story
But you would benefit from using an editor - there are bits where it doesn't read well. :-)
Another nice read!
I liked it a lot. I think your first story was sexier, in my humble opinion. I hope you add chapters to that one. I gave this 4 stars tho. Thanks for sharing!!
j
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