A good start, though it might have been better to combine with the Ch 02 that I hope is on its way. :)
I appreciate the comment. I probably should have included a brief synopsis for this initial chapter. Nonetheless Ch.02 is submitted and hopefully posting soon. I'm improving the pacing as I move forward with the story.
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Good start
A good start, though it might have been better to combine with the Ch 02 that I hope is on its way. :)
Thanks
I appreciate the comment. I probably should have included a brief synopsis for this initial chapter. Nonetheless Ch.02 is submitted and hopefully posting soon. I'm improving the pacing as I move forward with the story.
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Back to Confessions of a Teacher Ch. 01 or
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