I am glad you have continued with this story, I like the way we are getting a glimpse of the characters through emails. Makes for a very different story.
I shall wait eagerly for chapter 4.
Shysub, thanks as usual for the constructive comments. I wrote this series using fictional emails to see if I could pull it off. As a writer yourself, I'm sure you can appreciate that doing it in such a way is more of a challenge than writing from a point of view that allows the reader to know what the characters are thinking, and I believe I was somewhat successful. Stand by for the next chapter about the collaring ceremony and afterward. I hope to have it done by the weekend.
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You again, eh?
Thank you, anonymous, once again, for your cogent analysis.
An interesting tale
Quirkily different and only a few grammatical errors to mar a nice story.
Thanks, Masterfuljim
Appreciate your feedback. Where were the grammar errors? I strive for perfection, but sometimes fall a bit short, sorry.
Great!
I am glad you have continued with this story, I like the way we are getting a glimpse of the characters through emails. Makes for a very different story.
I shall wait eagerly for chapter 4.
Thanks, Shysub
Shysub, thanks as usual for the constructive comments. I wrote this series using fictional emails to see if I could pull it off. As a writer yourself, I'm sure you can appreciate that doing it in such a way is more of a challenge than writing from a point of view that allows the reader to know what the characters are thinking, and I believe I was somewhat successful. Stand by for the next chapter about the collaring ceremony and afterward. I hope to have it done by the weekend.
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