All Comments on 'A Pretty Rose'

by christinaNZ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
ugh

very bad.

Teenage VenusTeenage Venusalmost 20 years ago
Hmmm!

I like horror to be either spinechilling or funny - or both.

This didn't quite make it for me. The idea was good. Somehow, it just failed to transport me into her situation, and to 'feel' her fear.

Some slight consolation may lay in the fact that I've read around two dozen stories on here today, and this rated in the top third IMHO.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
sucked balls

worst story i ever read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
well sod you all

i thought it was good

creepy and scary

and i liked the way her thoughts were portrayed, proplerly human and not 'horror movie' screaming submissive fear style.

and the insane dude, very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Oh my goodness, this is so beautifully written. I like the down to earth style you have. Please continue!

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