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ugh
very bad.
Hmmm!
I like horror to be either spinechilling or funny - or both.
This didn't quite make it for me. The idea was good. Somehow, it just failed to transport me into her situation, and to 'feel' her fear.
Some slight consolation may lay in the fact that I've read around two dozen stories on here today, and this rated in the top third IMHO.
sucked balls
worst story i ever read
well sod you all
i thought it was good
creepy and scary
and i liked the way her thoughts were portrayed, proplerly human and not 'horror movie' screaming submissive fear style.
and the insane dude, very nice.
Oh my goodness, this is so beautifully written. I like the down to earth style you have. Please continue!
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