A Broken Family Ch. 08

LOVED IT!

I am so obsessed with this story that i have been looking every hour for an upload, i totally love this story but this chapter has killed me. I love the way Alex JT and Eli are so different but love Holly so much, Siguela

You tease!!!

Please for the love of chocolate and all that is holy and sacred in the world don't keep us hanging update soon and if you could give me my JT fix along with it I will worship at your alter.

Hungry for more

I love it! You are doing a great job at this, and I will be waiting for more!

Poor write.

Poor write. Now you are making her the family whore.

Everyone has their own opinion. I love this story. I don't feel she is a whore. Alex loves her with a deep passion. He has been the respondible one. JT is the wild one and is wild due to his love for her. Eli the brother who is her best friend. That love is deep. Holly loves each of them. Like Eli said before they are an unconventional family. Alex and JT seemed worried before about Eli getting hurt, but I don't think so. Looking forward to more of this story.

more more more

Beautiful love square lol cause there's four of them. Like how each brother loves her in a different way but nonetheless

LOVE IT!!

Every day I log on and look for another chapter. This is very well written. Holly definitely isn't a whore. I think she's finally starting to realize that she loves her brothers more than brothers and sleeping with them is more than just losing her virginity. I love the way your portray each brother's love for her. Fits their personalities exactly!! Write more soon!!!

Vey hot

Can't wait for more as this is a great story line, very hot.

Prediction

I'm just worried they all find out about each other and end up hating her.

Fav chapter!

For some reason this chapter made me feel hot.
I love your works! Keep it up!

Eli

Love this series! Everyone has a different opinion, but I really want Holly to be with Eli! This chapter was awesome. I wish all 4 of them were going on the camping trip again because it would be verrrry interesting now that she's "progressed" with each of them. I hope they don't all find out about each other because it's going to get ugly!

Whoa

My excitement levels for holly and Alex to go camping are almost too much to take. Hurryyyy up!!! :):):)

keep going

i know many people are saying that she is becoming the family whore but I don't think so she is just progressing a different relationship with each of the and you are doing a great job at writing it, love the way the story is going (especially with Eli) don't let peoples comment change the way you want the story to go !!:)

love it

I am really loving this story. It is very well written. I have hopes for each brother but think she is going to end up losing all 3, with her secrets. So excited for the next chapter.

when are yu going to update ....

hey this wait is KILLING me can yu pls update soon . and i agree Alex is going to flip his shit and jt is going to be so mad and not talk to her and Eli is going to be heartbroken ...... like she said its just sex with jt and with Eli it will be more but what about Alex ? how dose he fit into the picture. cant wait for more

omg

When will chapter 8 be up?! I can't wait much longer, I'm gonna lose my mind.

Love this...

I absolutely love this story.. Can't wait for the new chapter!

chapter

I love this series but getting tired of waiting weeks for new chapters..just about to give up on it. Don't start a series and make readers wait days on end

I love the series but I'm getting tired of waiting

Why are we waiting

Love this story and the pace of the story telling but I agree with others the wait between updates is too long especially since In the chapter 1 or 2 comments section you wrote you had 10 chapters ready to upload.

Chapter 9

When is chapter 9 going to be up? Its been almost a week now. Just curious what happens next in the story.

ummm

I'm tired of waiting for ch. 9. It's been to long. It should be up already it's been a week

school

Well she had school when she started... maybe she shouldnt start a series then make people wait weeks. also chp. 7 &8 are the same story

Chapter Nine

If you don't like the wait, don't read anything on this website that has chapters. I haven't gone more than five days between chapters until now. I have been waiting for it to get approved so go hound those people.

rude

Stop being hard on her. Stop reading if you're gonna bitch at her between chapters. When do you think itll be up hun?

Love!

She has a different dynamic with each brother and its well written! 5stars!