Well, poop. I try to be really careful about grammar mistakes like that. Obviously more care needs to be taken. Thanks for catching it though.
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Anonymous07/30/14
The bedroom was quite (what) dark, cold hot, sunny. Did you mean quiet?
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Anonymous07/31/14
Just Loving Her
The grammar wasn't right...Pussy eating is great...Yada...yada...yada...This story is about a man who wanted to show the woman in his life just how much he loved her...Kudos to the author. Giving in love is sometimes more important than receiving.
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Anonymous08/01/14
Love This Couple!
Really enjoyed all your stories about these two! Hope there's more to come. Great, sweet couple. There's obviously a lot of emotion and love there besides the sex which just makes it more multi-dimensional.
The occasional mistakes in spelling and grammar should not detract from this gentle and sensitive account. Tom wisely brings up a delicate issue and learns much more about Mal. Satisfyingly, the oral sex is mutually enjoyed and Mal regains self-esteem and even deeper love for her caring partner. What's not to like about that?
Thomas is a lucky man. But Mal is an even luckier woman. Believable characters, erotic sex, what could be better? I enjoyed it very much.
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Anonymous07/03/16
Best taste ever
Too bad more men don't allow themselves to indulge in the sweetest taste in the world.
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Anonymous08/02/16
HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN. VBC. MONKTON,VERMONT.
HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN. VICTORY BAPTIST CHURCH - VERGENNES,VERMONT. & HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN - MONKTON,VERMONT. BEEN THERE PUSSY DONE THAT PUSSY. I AM THE FATHER/DADDY OF THE BABY'S/KID'S THAT SHE HAS HAD AND SHE IS HAVING. CUTE PRETTY BEAUTIFUL HOT SEXY GORGEOUS BABE.
English
love to eat pussy. the smells the taste..........mmmmm
Grammar
"She gives in and let's him munch on her pussy. " let's is a contraction for 'let us'
Darn
Well, poop. I try to be really careful about grammar mistakes like that. Obviously more care needs to be taken. Thanks for catching it though.
The bedroom was quite (what) dark, cold hot, sunny. Did you mean quiet?
Just Loving Her
The grammar wasn't right...Pussy eating is great...Yada...yada...yada...This story is about a man who wanted to show the woman in his life just how much he loved her...Kudos to the author. Giving in love is sometimes more important than receiving.
Love This Couple!
Really enjoyed all your stories about these two! Hope there's more to come. Great, sweet couple. There's obviously a lot of emotion and love there besides the sex which just makes it more multi-dimensional.
Delicate and satisfying
The occasional mistakes in spelling and grammar should not detract from this gentle and sensitive account. Tom wisely brings up a delicate issue and learns much more about Mal. Satisfyingly, the oral sex is mutually enjoyed and Mal regains self-esteem and even deeper love for her caring partner. What's not to like about that?
Another good one
Great stories. Your stories remind me of those written by masked_author, one of my favorite writers on Literorica...that's a huge compliment. :)
very nice
Yes, there were spelling errors the editors should have caught, but the story itself
got me wet and tingly. Good man, Thomas!!!
Another great story!
Thomas is a lucky man. But Mal is an even luckier woman. Believable characters, erotic sex, what could be better? I enjoyed it very much.
Best taste ever
Too bad more men don't allow themselves to indulge in the sweetest taste in the world.
HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN. VBC. MONKTON,VERMONT.
HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN. VICTORY BAPTIST CHURCH - VERGENNES,VERMONT. & HANNAH HARDING KAUFMAN - MONKTON,VERMONT. BEEN THERE PUSSY DONE THAT PUSSY. I AM THE FATHER/DADDY OF THE BABY'S/KID'S THAT SHE HAS HAD AND SHE IS HAVING. CUTE PRETTY BEAUTIFUL HOT SEXY GORGEOUS BABE.
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