Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 10

Thank you...

I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to many more. Thank you for sharing such a great story.

Brilliant!

I enjoy this story. First comment I've ever made. A best seller is just around the corner!!

Thanks

I am really enjoying the story. Thanks!

Smooth and flowing.

Yay!

You're back!

Debug

peeling, not pealing.
Good story.

Outstanding Story

You are doing a great job, keep up the good work.I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

the commanders experiement

I think the commanders little experiement will be a success as long as she doesn't try and push it while enjoying the results herself.

more more more

Thank you for sharing this great story.

Good Work!

I just recently found this story and I have enjoyed it thoroughly. Good writing!

Some have pointed out a similar Literotica story to this one, so I dug out and read the entire 13 chapters of said story - "Kita'thalla", by Bowoodstock. Chapters 1-11 were written in 2010; #12 in 2011, and the final #13 in 2013. It does indeed have a similar interstellar plot to this one - male shipwrecked military doctor meets female feline alien soldier after both ships crash following combat. They quickly realize that their survival depends upon mutual cooperation.

However, Ripperfish's story is a totally different from, and should not be confused with, the one by Bowoodstock. One of the biggest differences is that although sexual tension and affection developes, there is no actual sex between the characters in "Kita'thalla". If there were ever to be a chapter 14, that could change, as the stage was certainly set for it. "Kita'thalla" focuses more on character development, especially the complex background of the feline character. The characters in "Upon a Savage Shore" face far more dangers from the local fauna than do those in "Kita'thalla".

Both plots roughly parallel the first 20% of "Enemy Mine", but diverge onto their own paths from there.

I highly recommend both stories. They are well-written and the plot and characters well developed and fleshed out by their respective authors. Far different from the standard short "suck and fucks" usually found on Literotica.

Still very good :)
Jason

Very

Awsome! No recent comments. Wanted to give some love. Great story. Even transitional chapters help make the story in my opinion. This one didn't feel tedious at all. :)