I absolutely love this series! But boy do you need a proof reader. The last 4 paragraphs broke the flow and were quite incomprehensible. There were also little typos and grammar mistakes throughout the whole thing but the last 4 paragraphs had some damn serious issues.
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I absolutely love this series!
But boy do you need a proof reader. The last 4 paragraphs broke the flow and were quite incomprehensible. There were also little typos and grammar mistakes throughout the whole thing but the last 4 paragraphs had some damn serious issues.
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