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by Pleasure_Lover09/12/14

I absolutely love this series!

But boy do you need a proof reader. The last 4 paragraphs broke the flow and were quite incomprehensible. There were also little typos and grammar mistakes throughout the whole thing but the last 4 paragraphs had some damn serious issues.

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