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Adapt Or Die

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone07/30/14

what can I say?

5ed

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by Magnetron07/30/14

Don't say anything.

Just hold me.

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by Cleardaynow07/30/14

Excellent

Fantastic rant. Done in such a nice way. Really excellent. Good pace and build up too.

Then, to cap it all, you produce a killer response comment. Well done.

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by Ashesh907/30/14

evolvin'

from a lowly 'porno' Pimp
to
an Upright Walkin' Chimp .........
Charles Darwin couldn't have put it better , Magnetron : 5-ed , of course !!

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by todski2808/03/14

HA,

enjoyed the build up and the final stanzas, your rhythm and rhyme are always on point, rant form suits the hell out of your writing.

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