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a true daddys girl
she wants a lot more I can tell.
Hottt
Mmmmmm delicious!
Your style is so unique and original. You keep it simple (LOVE 'Junior' in the background) but so lustful! I adore this Daddy and daughter. Keep writing more, please!
Awesome
Loved it, but we need more gotta find out how her dad "takes care"of the situation.
Expected to some degree
...but playing this out as strictly a dominating dad and slave daughter story is a bit of a let down. It started out as him suckling her milky breasts and her uncertain enjoyment of the moment. I expressed concern that it would turn into yet another nasty/slutty daughter story and now must also worry about it going the way of a different but equally tired path of "the sexual slave to older man". Sure it's nominally father-daughter but I find no great eroticism in dom-sub role play. Kind of if you've read one, you've read them all in my opinion.
"Yes, sir!" just isn't sexy or even interesting to me and it's been used three times in a single page here. I guess it has its fans and I'd try one more chapter out of curiosity but you're losing me to be honest. Not to worry - this site has its share of folk who will tell you to pour it on with the domination slave stuff. Bold and assertive is fine but, if I wanted BDSM, I'd have gone to that category. There's no need to toss all that into a lactation fetish and father-daughter cuckold story which already hints at further impregnation.
If chapter 4 has any lesbian werewolves though, I'm gone for sure. LOL Keep doing your own thing and don't try to fill a shopping list of preferences from these comments, in spite of my own remarks. Best regards.
daddy's girl
I truly loved the breast feeding aspect. I am looking forward to finding out how he manages the husband side of this relationship plus the daughter's apparent desire to have daddy's baby. Keep up the good work.
Thanks again!
First of all, thanks to any and all who take the time/trouble to write me some feedback here - it helps more than you know! I can say that while I know what I want to have happen to my characters, the manner in which that will take place is still not clear in my mind, so please be patient with me - I'd rather take my time moving forward than just rush in recklessly! :)
For "Anonymous" (it would be so much nicer if I had a specific member to address here, but c'est la vie): Thanks for your comment, but I assure you, this couple will NOT be a Dominating dad/slave, as that isn't good for me, either. I DO plan on developing the Dom/sub relationship here because that IS good for me, but she will NOT be his slave or pet, he is simply asserting himself (albeit clumsily, thanks to my lack of writing experience) as her Dom, her Sir. The suckling and milky breasts is NOT going to be something I will go too much farther with because it's not all that interesting to me, but it will remain a factor to some extent. You mentioned your concern that it might "turn into yet another nasty/slutty daughter story" and/or "the sexual slave to older man," but again I assure you, the concept alone turns me off and is NOT where I want to go.
As for it being "nominally father-daughter," that I can't help you with - for me, the fact that he is her Daddy - her REAL father - is what makes the D/s bond so sexy, so taboo. I personally, as a submissive, think there could be no more profound submission than to submit to a father, even if I have zero interest in my own. Submission is not about sex, it's about giving oneself fully to someone else, of entrusting oneself to someone else, and to giving control to someone else. Sure there's sex involved, but that is involved in ANY romantic relationship, and maybe I will figure out a way to show readers (maybe even you!) what I'm trying to say about that - or maybe I'll fail, but at least I will try! :)
Anyway, I will do my best, but the one thing I will NOT do is write something I don't find erotic or sexy. Hopefully I will please more people than not along the way! :D
Sequel!
Please tell me this story will have some sort of resolution. Preferably a happy one where she and her father can finally be together.
The anticipation is killing me!
interested reader wants to know
If this is a true story.
Yes and no! haha
Yes, there will definitely be at least one more chapter, more likely two, but we'll see how things turn out. I will not reveal the happy or sad final vibe, though - you gotta read to find out! heehee
And No, this is not a true story, or at least, if it is, then it's a total coincidence. I naively chose to write it in 1st person, but no, it's not my story at all, just pure imagination! :)
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