You have just shown how a story can be sexy, yet not pornographic. If you aren't old, you sure have a good grasp of how it is for the senior set. *****
A gentle and surprising union. Love never sees the blemishes, the extra weight or stretch marks. And love never ceases to amaze, even for empty nesters. Nicely paced short passage which lifts the heart and flesh.
Thecarolinadreamer; thank you, and while I am at the age of being an empty nester I will never be old ;). JWren; it is true, love doesn't see blemishes, which I am thankful for. Again thank you both for enjoying and commenting on my little story.
English
An important stage in life well defined
Nicely done, very nicely done indeed. Fine Wordsmithing.
Response
Many thanks kind sir. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
THANKS
You have just shown how a story can be sexy, yet not pornographic. If you aren't old, you sure have a good grasp of how it is for the senior set. *****
Uplifting
A gentle and surprising union. Love never sees the blemishes, the extra weight or stretch marks. And love never ceases to amaze, even for empty nesters. Nicely paced short passage which lifts the heart and flesh.
Response
Thecarolinadreamer; thank you, and while I am at the age of being an empty nester I will never be old ;). JWren; it is true, love doesn't see blemishes, which I am thankful for. Again thank you both for enjoying and commenting on my little story.
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Excellent.
Hubby is a lucky man, and you are an excellent writer. I look forward to reading al of your posts.
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