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The Boy Across the Street

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by Anonymous07/29/14

Get an editor.

The story isn’t bad but your grammar is terrible. “Perky” 42DDs? I hardly think so.

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by Anonymous07/29/14

roflmfao

made it to the useless fucking melons that would be hanging to her knees and said fuck this trash
Cant even be bothered to give it an ace

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by Anonymous02/16/15

good job

that was fucing sexy as hell.you should wtite another one when you do make it naughty ang rough

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