The story isn’t bad but your grammar is terrible. “Perky” 42DDs? I hardly think so.
made it to the useless fucking melons that would be hanging to her knees and said fuck this trash Cant even be bothered to give it an ace
that was fucing sexy as hell.you should wtite another one when you do make it naughty ang rough
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The story isn’t bad but your grammar is terrible. “Perky” 42DDs? I hardly think so.
roflmfao
made it to the useless fucking melons that would be hanging to her knees and said fuck this trash
Cant even be bothered to give it an ace
good job
that was fucing sexy as hell.you should wtite another one when you do make it naughty ang rough
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