A Lady of Thorns

Fabulous story @ the beginning of a relationship

I could feel the heat of the flower shop, and smell the roses. I wanted to be her. It made me wet.

Hot

Had me breathing funny. Loved it!

fuck the roses

that was a lovely story and i do hope it happened and developed....but if it didnt it was still a very well written tale with a deliciously erotic finale and all the more satisfying fr that. well done and thanks

Beautiful Story

This is a beautiful story beautifully told. Write on, Doc.
Catherine

The characters are first rate!

This is another piece of terrific writing from you. I'm sorry I didn't find it for so long -- what a powerful bit of characterization. She has been moved to my personal list of favorite women on Literotica and he is, uncomfortably, all of us. The flowers are a frame for them and the last three paras a final frame for an exceptional story. Thanks again.

Wonderful Story!

I was told I should read this and I am so glad I did. What a lovely story of submission. I can see why you are held in high regard here. It was all so vivid I felt like I was there and could smell the flowers and feel the crop. Thank you.

Amazing

Absoltely beautiful story: very well written and what a story line. I just could picture it in my mind so vividly. Just excellent!!!

So Very Addictive

I have fingered and fucked and slapped myself to too many orgasms to count, reading your stories and replaying them in my mind. :) Passionate and vivid as always, doctor. Thank you.

~submissive.betweenthesheets

Great story!

The last two sentences were the perfect end.

Thank you for the story.

This really is one of my favorite short stories.

Not Literotica stories, or even just yours, but short stories full stop. Rudyard Kipling and Connie Willis and _Bartleby the Scrivener_ be damned. :)

Kicking myself for not reading more of your stuff sooner. WOW. Going to be busy catching up.

you continue to please!

Wow! I'm amazed at your ability to just draw me into your stories...I can feel the passion, the sting of the whips, the leather of the cuffs, the slide of their cocks...
I also thought it a refreshing change to read about a sub giving instruction...
Midnight S

Makes me want more

Makes me remember when I had a great male friend online. I miss him. Great story too.

Tender

This sends me over the edge. the passion,the heat and of course your words!

so happy to have read your stories

firstly, i enjoyed the narrator's lack of experience; it was a refreshing twist on the typical D/s story. how you used that to further the plot and give light to some deep emotional aspects of bdsm is what makes this, and many of your stories, so enjoyable for me. It's a fulfilling experience when i can relate to characters' feelings and thoughts. i'm so happy to have read your stories!

Unbelievable

Your stories are absolutely beautiful.

great story

Stunning!

Quite incredible - a very talented writer.

Hat's off to an exceptional writer...

Reading stories I would've passed right on by before... I'd read the back of a cereal box if you wrote it, doc...