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by Anonymous08/01/14

reminded me of how it felt the first time and how I could regenerate those erections then nicely done

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by abig5inches08/12/14

rushed

Had a great build up... It's sad that u just rushed the story in the end. Continue writing and improve this story if you can. More details

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