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Uncertain Desires Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by sexy_bosoxgirl07/31/14

great start

But needs longer chapters...love the idea twin alphas finding twin mates look forward to see where this goes

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by Anonymous07/31/14

I agree

Need longer chapter but thank you for a great story the writing is great very easy to follow.

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by ariesgirl07/31/14

The guys would not have stood too much of a chance with the girls regardless of how they approached them. They have been through bad things and haven't gotten over it.

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by Anonymous07/31/14

story

love kick ass heroines!! if their this awesome now imagine how they'll be once they become alpha bitches.

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by hazeleys3408/01/14

story

The story was much easier to follow and am looking forward to the next chapter. The others are right, longer chapters would be great.

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by werewolfsmate08/02/14

Love it!!!!!!

This is a great beginning to a wonderful story, so please please please keep adding to it!!!!

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by Anonymous08/05/14

LOVE how the girls got away from those arrogant bastards - good for them!

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