The guys would not have stood too much of a chance with the girls regardless of how they approached them. They have been through bad things and haven't gotten over it.
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Anonymous07/31/14
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love kick ass heroines!! if their this awesome now imagine how they'll be once they become alpha bitches.
great start
But needs longer chapters...love the idea twin alphas finding twin mates look forward to see where this goes
I agree
Need longer chapter but thank you for a great story the writing is great very easy to follow.
The guys would not have stood too much of a chance with the girls regardless of how they approached them. They have been through bad things and haven't gotten over it.
story
love kick ass heroines!! if their this awesome now imagine how they'll be once they become alpha bitches.
story
The story was much easier to follow and am looking forward to the next chapter. The others are right, longer chapters would be great.
Love it!!!!!!
This is a great beginning to a wonderful story, so please please please keep adding to it!!!!
LOVE how the girls got away from those arrogant bastards - good for them!
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