All Comments on 'Beyonce in Bondage Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow

I have been a fan from the beginning checking back daily and I must say this is a big let down, please consider a redo. It is like you decided to throw away the series. What happens to Rihanna, what about Nikki and Kim, what about Lady Gaga and Aguilera, really nothing happens to the star this is all center on the night that the whole thing blows up. I am really sad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
sigh

This is not at all what I expected. The other updates were sooo good and now we have this, that doesn't really tie up any loose ends. Im really disappointed, had been looking forward to this update for like two years and it just falls short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Triumph of The Dark Cloud

The Dark Cloud won!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sorry

This was a horrible ending to what was an incredible series

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great story

Beyonce needs to be sock gagged

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Dark cloud is king!!!!

Amazing series, just awesome. Just watched beyonce at super bowl, can't see her being sub to anyone haha. Can see white bitches getting severe kicking from her. Give them the boots master beyonce xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I feel another series of this is needed, only instead of Beyonce, what about Gal Gadot next time?

EdgarNightbirdEdgarNightbirdover 1 year ago

If you want to read more of this story, I wrote a follow-up chapter (with permission from TheDarkCloud). This was rejected here but can be found on other sites with less draconic submission rules (HF, Pixiv, fetlib).

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