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More asap!!!!!
This story is hotter than Georgia asphalt!!! Cannot wait for next chapter and to see Joanne get feminized and FUCKED!!! Write soon.... Soooooooo Good!!!
Marching Cadence--Ten HUT!
I'M A GIRLEY BOY NO FEAR
I LIKE MEN WHO FUCK MY REAR!
HE'S THE CHIEF AND HE AIN'T CRASS
HE'LL JAM COCK RIGHT UP MY ASS
SOUND OFF--ONE TWO!
SOUND OFF--THREE FOUR!
a sissies dream
can't wait for more and how your sister does her magic on turning this gay sissy nice and feminine for her man
more chapters this great 5 stars
Just awful.
I simply can't find the words to tell you how bad this was.
loved it
Really enjoyed it looking forward to the next chapter
like it so far
I like the story. I have felt some of these feelings before. He, oh pardon me, SHE is feeling things that are confusing. But yet her destiny is becoming clear to her. Anxious for the next installment
Proofreading
Interesting story. The language (verb tense, punctuation, phrasing) is much better than many stories. But the proofreading still missed where the Chief grew up: was it Chicago or Mississippi? Waiting to enjoy reading about Joanne's cosmetician experience.
"To the tune of Anchors Aweigh"
ASSHOLES GET SPREAD-MY BOYS!
ASSHOLES GET SPREAD!
BIG COCKS GET SHOVED RIGHT IN
AND CUM SHOOTS IN, IT'S SAID
this is a really nice story , i cant wait to read more ,well done you ,x
love the story
Love your story, It so reminds me of the man that so turned me, helped me become the girl i wanted to be
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