I enjoyed this story because I liked the way you portrayed the two of them, and that rang real to me. I guess what surprises me is how long they waited for the moment of enlightenment.
Yes, it is a little hard to go from sister to mother in a single page, but if George Lucas can do it, why not deedisdone. Oh, yeah, Darth Vader was STILL Luke's mortal enemy, not his fuck buddy.
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Anonymous08/06/14
redlion75 you were not the only one saw it coming ,more chapters to where hannah gets pregnant by him
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Anonymous08/06/14
It was was from his balls that we both came.
It was ok. Sometimes comical but not in a good way.
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Anonymous08/06/14
Great!
But wasn't she his great Auntie and Grandmammy also?
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Anonymous08/06/14
I don't know exactly how this works
with Jake's sister Hannah being his mother. I mean, didn't he notice how much older she was than him? Still, any story that gets a boy's big hard cock up his own mother's warm wet twat is fine by me. Jake's a guy after my own heart. He says, "The thought of fucking a girl who is my own flesh and blood gets me harder than a steel rod." Lots and lots of boys think that way, that family cunt is the best cunt there is, and thinking about fucking it gets them hard in their pants, harder than they've ever been before. (Sometimes the very idea gets the boy creaming his shorts.) Hannah knows how to push the button of Jake's "incest fetish": "Gimme your long thick cock. Come back into the hole you were made in." That's exactly what Jake does, and like every son as lucky as he is, nothing's ever felt as good to his young cock as being surrounded by layers of warm loving mommy-twat. He pumps away like a trooper, tingling all over his body. Jake ends up blowing his young balls up the same cunt he came out of, proudly shooting his mom a great big twatful of his creamy semen. Personally, I don't care for the (pretty predictable) ass-fucking. This boy's got much more exploring to do of his mother's mommy-hole. But DID is only 18 to 22 years old. Lucky for us, we've got years of terrific stories of dirty family fun to look forward to from this highly gifted author.
Saw it comming a mile away, have an ex-wife that her older brother is also her uncle because her father raped her older sisters before she was born, her mother took her and her younger sister out of state, she was never sure if her mother was her mother or one of her sisters.
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Anonymous08/07/14
Juvenile trash
It doesn't even have shock value because you could predict it from the title and opening paragraph alone. Tossing every bad rip-off porn idea into a single short story is not a very creative move.
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Anonymous08/08/14
Yawn
I guess for those males who are really into incest as such, the ultimate fantasy is to fuck your mother and sister simultaneously...
However, to project a woman who has been denied for two decades to act in the role as mother towards her own son, as wanting to fuck him as her first priority the moment she "steps out of the cupboard", is psychologically unbelievable.
All you stuck up, "anonymous" critics & ho well the ones with no same or similar work. ZIP IT! If it was Alwayswantedto, klrxo, nightshadow, Ahabscribe etc (with a couple of hot rated incest stories) that commented the author could maybe take a note. maybe.
Please more? I totally agree the comment that asked for more pregnancy.
lesliejones - I agree, plus it's hot
Hamster - Dude, that is just a epic comment! ;-)
Yes people this is a erotic site with much fiction, to get you off, ultimately.
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Anonymous08/11/14
far out
That was something different sister and mother dude that story was excellent but should of been longer
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Anonymous08/27/14
Loved it
Alright bro it's time for a sequel what happens next? WE MUST KNOW! Great story
That was some crazy, mixed up shit and I loved it! Great idea that even if it was telegraphed a bit was still immensely enjoyable. Don't see what some people are moaning about; this is a good short story and my only gripe is that it could have been longer.
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Anonymous10/29/14
Doing Daughter/Niece
After my sister was divorced, I was staying with her and her young son. soon we began to have sex and I knocked her up, she gave birth to our Daughter/Niece, I married and moved on, now my daughter/Niece, is grown and I have fucked her three or more times since, wow, great pussy. I told her about her mom and I, she said she wants to have a dau with me, we are still trying. who knows I may wind up screwing my dau with her:)
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Anonymous12/27/14
Best
This is the most beautiful and THE best story so far. Loved every word of it.
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Anonymous01/19/15
bigdogdicklover
i was 10 when my 40 yr old uncle started fucking my butthole i told him to fuck my pussy on the dozenth pussyfuck my grampa cought uncle fucking me silly, beat him with a shovel and made my suck his huge cock ,grampa knocked me up i gave birth to a girl befor age 11 the next time i got pregers i thought i was going to hav pupies
English
kind of saw it cumming
all in a single page story?
man i just cant think of having a guy fuck his sister and mother fuck in a single page story.
good job
I enjoyed this story because I liked the way you portrayed the two of them, and that rang real to me. I guess what surprises me is how long they waited for the moment of enlightenment.
Luke! I Am Your Moooooother!
Yes, it is a little hard to go from sister to mother in a single page, but if George Lucas can do it, why not deedisdone. Oh, yeah, Darth Vader was STILL Luke's mortal enemy, not his fuck buddy.
redlion75 you were not the only one saw it coming ,more chapters to where hannah gets pregnant by him
It was was from his balls that we both came.
It was ok. Sometimes comical but not in a good way.
Great!
But wasn't she his great Auntie and Grandmammy also?
I don't know exactly how this works
with Jake's sister Hannah being his mother. I mean, didn't he notice how much older she was than him? Still, any story that gets a boy's big hard cock up his own mother's warm wet twat is fine by me. Jake's a guy after my own heart. He says, "The thought of fucking a girl who is my own flesh and blood gets me harder than a steel rod." Lots and lots of boys think that way, that family cunt is the best cunt there is, and thinking about fucking it gets them hard in their pants, harder than they've ever been before. (Sometimes the very idea gets the boy creaming his shorts.) Hannah knows how to push the button of Jake's "incest fetish": "Gimme your long thick cock. Come back into the hole you were made in." That's exactly what Jake does, and like every son as lucky as he is, nothing's ever felt as good to his young cock as being surrounded by layers of warm loving mommy-twat. He pumps away like a trooper, tingling all over his body. Jake ends up blowing his young balls up the same cunt he came out of, proudly shooting his mom a great big twatful of his creamy semen. Personally, I don't care for the (pretty predictable) ass-fucking. This boy's got much more exploring to do of his mother's mommy-hole. But DID is only 18 to 22 years old. Lucky for us, we've got years of terrific stories of dirty family fun to look forward to from this highly gifted author.
Predictable
Saw it comming a mile away, have an ex-wife that her older brother is also her uncle because her father raped her older sisters before she was born, her mother took her and her younger sister out of state, she was never sure if her mother was her mother or one of her sisters.
Juvenile trash
It doesn't even have shock value because you could predict it from the title and opening paragraph alone. Tossing every bad rip-off porn idea into a single short story is not a very creative move.
Yawn
I guess for those males who are really into incest as such, the ultimate fantasy is to fuck your mother and sister simultaneously...
However, to project a woman who has been denied for two decades to act in the role as mother towards her own son, as wanting to fuck him as her first priority the moment she "steps out of the cupboard", is psychologically unbelievable.
I LIKE IT
All you stuck up, "anonymous" critics & ho well the ones with no same or similar work. ZIP IT! If it was Alwayswantedto, klrxo, nightshadow, Ahabscribe etc (with a couple of hot rated incest stories) that commented the author could maybe take a note. maybe.
Please more? I totally agree the comment that asked for more pregnancy.
lesliejones - I agree, plus it's hot
Hamster - Dude, that is just a epic comment! ;-)
Yes people this is a erotic site with much fiction, to get you off, ultimately.
far out
That was something different sister and mother dude that story was excellent but should of been longer
Loved it
Alright bro it's time for a sequel what happens next? WE MUST KNOW! Great story
Crazy mix up!
That was some crazy, mixed up shit and I loved it! Great idea that even if it was telegraphed a bit was still immensely enjoyable. Don't see what some people are moaning about; this is a good short story and my only gripe is that it could have been longer.
Doing Daughter/Niece
After my sister was divorced, I was staying with her and her young son. soon we began to have sex and I knocked her up, she gave birth to our Daughter/Niece, I married and moved on, now my daughter/Niece, is grown and I have fucked her three or more times since, wow, great pussy. I told her about her mom and I, she said she wants to have a dau with me, we are still trying. who knows I may wind up screwing my dau with her:)
Best
This is the most beautiful and THE best story so far. Loved every word of it.
bigdogdicklover
i was 10 when my 40 yr old uncle started fucking my butthole i told him to fuck my pussy on the dozenth pussyfuck my grampa cought uncle fucking me silly, beat him with a shovel and made my suck his huge cock ,grampa knocked me up i gave birth to a girl befor age 11 the next time i got pregers i thought i was going to hav pupies
bigdogdicklover
You are so full of SHIT!!!
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