Truth or Dare

So Boring

Its obvious what the next question should be because you progressed with this story so fast, and then once you past a certain point you try to back track and it just gets boring

hot one more chapters gave it a 5

More

I liked it that was a very good short story .Hope you do more with it .Remember those that can't write criticize .

Hot!

Fantastic erotic hot as hell story!

excellent

great dialogue and pacing. well done!

Good story

Would like to see another chapter. Thanks

not boring at all

Sometimes I wonder if a commenter's read the same story I have. This one is by the highly talented young woman author of Wrong Text. Like that story, it concerns a girl and her little brother, whose male attributes she's enjoying to the fullest. Hmm. Maybe Ms. MKR's got a little brother who helps out his big sister with what he's got jumping around in his pants. (I sure hope so.) Like siblings have done from time immemorial and are doing every night and day of the week everywhere, Eric and his sister play dirty fun games. They show each other what each one's got between their legs that's "different." Sis spreads her cunt-lips wide to let her brother see her pink and sopping wet insides, Eric springs a great big hard on, and they do what comes naturally to brothers and sisters. "I wrapped my legs around his back. 'Fuck my cunt! Pound me into the floor!"' Eric slams hard and fast into her till he blows his brotherly balls and shoots his semen deep inside her. As the boy's first spurt hits her cunt-walls, she has a great convulsive cum around her brother's cock. They've discovered what a brother's cock and his sister's cunt are for.

Too fast and short

That is why I was boring. If you had some build up like hearing thoughts working up to the day of the game would have made it better.

Wow

I don't normally read this subject and I don't normally like fast stories but I found myself wet with this one. Thanks!

Good Story

Fast and to the "point", Keep writing and add chapters.
To many people trying to write a classic novel on this site, rather then having fun.
Keep up the good work.
Tristate

Puppies

It needs more puppies! I am 8 btw so Ik what I'm talking about