and women intelligent enough to realize that the husband needs to be in it
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Anonymous08/03/14
Can never figure out why someone bothers to make moral judgements on a piece of fiction.
On a more practical note, perhaps the dialogue could be a bit more imaginitive. I found much of it too predictable.
Basic story but reasonably entertaining.
I had to comment after reading another comment: How can the wife be cheating if she's playing by his rules? Why do these kind of comments always show up when a woman in a story enjoys herself? You obviously hate women, Anon, so either stick with the "Gay Male" story section or, better yet, just leave the site completely. And don't come back.
finally a story that makes some sense
and women intelligent enough to realize that the husband needs to be in it
Can never figure out why someone bothers to make moral judgements on a piece of fiction.
On a more practical note, perhaps the dialogue could be a bit more imaginitive. I found much of it too predictable.
Basic story but reasonably entertaining.
I had to comment after reading another comment: How can the wife be cheating if she's playing by his rules? Why do these kind of comments always show up when a woman in a story enjoys herself? You obviously hate women, Anon, so either stick with the "Gay Male" story section or, better yet, just leave the site completely. And don't come back.
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