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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/02/14

Punishment ?

Punished for what?

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by grrlslave08/02/14

Ummmm??

I'm kind of lost here. What was she being punished for? It seemed really abusive instead of bdsm. Loved your writing style though.

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by Anonymous08/03/14

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For not paying attention to her Master. For showing complete disregard to what he's doing to and for her. The only time I have seen where a Master would allow that, is in subspace. He said in the beginning how he insulted her by daydreaming. Even if the day dream was about him. she is supposed to be in the present.

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