Awesome story ! Truly a thing of fantasy. The only thing that would have made it better, for me, is if you would have came inside Tracy's pussy, instead of your wife's ! Or did that happen later that night ?
Great story. I don't really like cheating stories, but this ended up being mutual. Of course he should have been a bit pissed that his wife did not warn him in advance. One question I still have is how his wife knew he would not go postal when he saw her fucking someone else. It does not seem feasible that someone would take their spouse to their first swap party without discussing it ahead of time. Some additional commentary in the story to answer that question would have been nice. Keep writing and thanks!
It is difficult, if not impossible, forme to believe that a business of any size (10 or more employees) could operate profitably when every employee and executive is a horndog or hornbitch. I also occur that Sweety not clueing in Hubby is both a tactical AND strategic error.
There are many swinger clubs groups gatherings but all in one company doesn't sound possible or plausible. The fact that the had a lesbian affair for 10 years 5of which they were married doesn't pass the smell test. In spite of the authors awkward premise the scenes were hot and the story was well written in the description. If the premise was on a neighbors party or a pub club or anything that people associate themselves with could have more logic. A boss would never have open sex with an employee subordinate without some consent of all related parties before hand. The fact his wife didn't disclose her lack of undergarments didn't make sense. The fact the husband didn't scream at the site of his wife blowing the boss didn't add up or even resort to an escalation of physical protest since he was not apprised. Either he and his wife are complete idiots or this story fell off a very high cliff to logical thinking. There were hot sex scenes period.
In the first place, going to your wife's bosses house, you wear underwear and I don't give a damn what the invite says. And you stay absolutely sober in that instance as you may effect your wife's career by making a mistake. And letting the boss screw your wife while you screw his in the next bed qualifies as a HUGE mistake. This silly story is so far past unbelievable it's laughable. Try again.
fiction |ˈfik sh ən|
noun
literature in the form of prose, esp. short stories and novels, that describes imaginary events and people.
• invention or fabrication as opposed to fact
A fiction is a story that is invented either to entertain or to deceive (: her excuse was ingenious, but it was pure fiction)
A fable is a fictitious story that deals with events or situations that are clearly fantastic, impossible, or incredible.
It is wonderful that, at an elevated income and social level, VD ceases to be an issue ... no syph or clap at the polo grounds!
Yes, a fable is usually a morality story which uses unrealistic or impossible characters to make a painful point more palatable. Fiction is most effective when it stretches credulity as little as possible, as rarely as possible. Total FAIL on this story meeting that standard...so we're left with FABLE! So, what is the moral of this fable?
How dare every work of pornography not be completely realistic in regards to STDs! I for one refuse to watch any porno where there isn't an extensive epilogue about all the actors slowly dying from aids. Thank you likideesplit for holding stories to this not at all ridiculous and arbitrary standard that I'm sure you bitch and moan equally about in all categories, not just loving wives.
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Awesome story ! Truly a thing of fantasy. The only thing that would have made it better, for me, is if you would have came inside Tracy's pussy, instead of your wife's ! Or did that happen later that night ?
Excellent
Great story. I don't really like cheating stories, but this ended up being mutual. Of course he should have been a bit pissed that his wife did not warn him in advance. One question I still have is how his wife knew he would not go postal when he saw her fucking someone else. It does not seem feasible that someone would take their spouse to their first swap party without discussing it ahead of time. Some additional commentary in the story to answer that question would have been nice. Keep writing and thanks!
Hot story, but
It is difficult, if not impossible, forme to believe that a business of any size (10 or more employees) could operate profitably when every employee and executive is a horndog or hornbitch. I also occur that Sweety not clueing in Hubby is both a tactical AND strategic error.
Hot story not plausible
There are many swinger clubs groups gatherings but all in one company doesn't sound possible or plausible. The fact that the had a lesbian affair for 10 years 5of which they were married doesn't pass the smell test. In spite of the authors awkward premise the scenes were hot and the story was well written in the description. If the premise was on a neighbors party or a pub club or anything that people associate themselves with could have more logic. A boss would never have open sex with an employee subordinate without some consent of all related parties before hand. The fact his wife didn't disclose her lack of undergarments didn't make sense. The fact the husband didn't scream at the site of his wife blowing the boss didn't add up or even resort to an escalation of physical protest since he was not apprised. Either he and his wife are complete idiots or this story fell off a very high cliff to logical thinking. There were hot sex scenes period.
Another alcohol fueled mistake.
In the first place, going to your wife's bosses house, you wear underwear and I don't give a damn what the invite says. And you stay absolutely sober in that instance as you may effect your wife's career by making a mistake. And letting the boss screw your wife while you screw his in the next bed qualifies as a HUGE mistake. This silly story is so far past unbelievable it's laughable. Try again.
Readers seem to have trouble with the concept...
fiction |ˈfik sh ən|
noun
literature in the form of prose, esp. short stories and novels, that describes imaginary events and people.
• invention or fabrication as opposed to fact
A fiction is a story that is invented either to entertain or to deceive (: her excuse was ingenious, but it was pure fiction)
A fable is a fictitious story that deals with events or situations that are clearly fantastic, impossible, or incredible.
The One Percent
It is wonderful that, at an elevated income and social level, VD ceases to be an issue ... no syph or clap at the polo grounds!
Yes, a fable is usually a morality story which uses unrealistic or impossible characters to make a painful point more palatable. Fiction is most effective when it stretches credulity as little as possible, as rarely as possible. Total FAIL on this story meeting that standard...so we're left with FABLE! So, what is the moral of this fable?
How dare every work of pornography not be completely realistic in regards to STDs! I for one refuse to watch any porno where there isn't an extensive epilogue about all the actors slowly dying from aids. Thank you likideesplit for holding stories to this not at all ridiculous and arbitrary standard that I'm sure you bitch and moan equally about in all categories, not just loving wives.
Poor story.
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