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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/17/07

erotic

Really very erotic, should be listed as a hot story.I enjoyed the ending.

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by Anonymous07/20/08

please define NON CONSENT

such a pity that a good story was mucked up by the soft cock ending - no need to add on the last bit. why not leave it in the correct genre or write it for this genre, instead of mixing it up?? No need for the last line.

Next time have the guts to leave that out!

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by lil_cocktease10/16/11

Teasing!

Oh my! Now, I want to tease the dirty old men on the same ride home with me after school. Maybe one of them will play with me roughly, eh?

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