The 10,000 USD question is "Did the lover cum in her or used a condom? He didn't asked nothing but he should have....He was open when he give her the green light, so she should have told him about what happen...Maybe next part...
by
Anonymous08/03/14
Questions Questions
Hubby doesn't really know if she did or didn't. Just a bunch of Questions floating around in his head. Part 2 will answer all the Questions.
Really enjoy reading an author that delves into his hidden fantasies. The use of cycle beads was hot. Please keep writing.
PS: You should always ignore the anonymous comments because they have little value. If someone will not take time to register then you should not take up your time to read them. Most of these are people that have skipped their psychiatrists visit a time or two.
Really not bad for a one pager, but I think you could have wrapped the story up with about another half page. Even though we know how the story line normally goes, seeing it in writing is more satisfying.
Nice start, but seriously, who has used the word Negro in the past 20 years? How old are you?
by
Anonymous08/04/14
re: anonymous-to automatic 1 anon
Have to disagree with you. Scores are usually a good indicator of the quality of a story. Ever notice the low scores go to badly written cuckoldry stories and the better written erotic stories preferred by most readers receive higher scores. Of course the cuckold lover doesn't really care about quality or erotica for that matter. He's strictly interested to feed his fetishes and self humiliation. In other words anon, you're a wimp.
by
Anonymous08/05/14
sorry white guys, lw makes you all seem pathetic
Loving wives is pretty much fantasizing your husband as pathetic, and there isn't anything they can do about it. Only single men, and black men are superior. Once a man becomes married, his dick shrinks, and he doesn't know how to use it. Even though are books out there like the multiple orgasmic man that any guy can purchase and last for hours in bed. Lord help us, if husbands find a way to satisfy a woman once he is married. Somehow he can't use the internet to improve and learn. Nope, he has to be a pathetic white husband. Also, he will never cheat on his wife, and he is always devoted to her. I feel lucky that I am a part of the younger generation, who can adapt and learn. It took me a month, but any guy can learn to be multiple orgasmic. It is hard work to practice, but hey you get to play with your little buddy and bond. Learn tantra sex to also. L-arginine and vitamin e can help improve erections and make them last longer. TLiving a healthy lifestyle can increase blood flow and give better erections. Letting go of anxiety and stress, can make you last longer. Geez, the wealth of information out there is staggering, and to bad people aren't using it. What man wouldn't want to go on for hours. Once men learn more about this, it will help out there sex life. Also, once men lose the fear of losing their wives, and let go of attachment, and find happiness within, bonds that shackles them to someone goes out the window. Having the power to walk away is powerful. My marine friend, who got cheated on left his ex, and guess what he found someone better. Ex is pathetic on trying to get him back. Cuckolds have a fear of losing their wives, so they put up with nearly anything. One cuckold pays alimony to support his ex-wife, her lover, and thher and lover's child. Idiot put his name on the birth certificate. women are biologically programmed to not be attracted to weak and needy guys. If these women have sons, do you think they want them to end up like their cuckold fathers. Just look at forums at cuckolds supporting the wife and her lover. What mother would want her offspring to be someone's safety net, and be used.
Only thing missing was as he pushed into her stretched hole and started fucking was the wife to ask............"are you in yet?" LOL Oh come on cuckold, you know she is hooked on real man cock now. You know full well that stud does not pull out of anything. That stud most likely filled her pussy three or four times that day. And maybe another load right into her belly as she sucked his cock.
The sad thing about this story is the husband didn't see or understand that his wife lost all the small respect she had for him. And that her respect for him is for ever lost! i don't see any other way to this story end unless in divorce or him to be for ever no man, no husband, no father, just another furniture in their house.
by
Anonymous08/13/14
"Negro"?
When did this take place, 1961??? That's a really outdated term, man. Bad dog.
is valid. A negro is a man of the Negroid race. That has never changed. Sure it is comes in the various "N word" varieties and has changed from colored to black to African-American (which is stupid in my opinion). In the few stories I have written I use "negro" in as a noun or adjective to add to the taboo-ness of the sex.
English
Lori's got all the potential to become a real slutwife! Next chapter please!
Nice start
I would love to read more and see how she becomes.
The 10,000 USD question...
The 10,000 USD question is "Did the lover cum in her or used a condom? He didn't asked nothing but he should have....He was open when he give her the green light, so she should have told him about what happen...Maybe next part...
Questions Questions
Hubby doesn't really know if she did or didn't. Just a bunch of Questions floating around in his head. Part 2 will answer all the Questions.
Great Job!
Really enjoy reading an author that delves into his hidden fantasies. The use of cycle beads was hot. Please keep writing.
PS: You should always ignore the anonymous comments because they have little value. If someone will not take time to register then you should not take up your time to read them. Most of these are people that have skipped their psychiatrists visit a time or two.
Terrible plot
1 star
Delicious filth
5*
WHERE IS THE REST?
Really not bad for a one pager, but I think you could have wrapped the story up with about another half page. Even though we know how the story line normally goes, seeing it in writing is more satisfying.
Good story
5 *'s
Now keep going!
Not bad, but
Nice start, but seriously, who has used the word Negro in the past 20 years? How old are you?
re: anonymous-to automatic 1 anon
Have to disagree with you. Scores are usually a good indicator of the quality of a story. Ever notice the low scores go to badly written cuckoldry stories and the better written erotic stories preferred by most readers receive higher scores. Of course the cuckold lover doesn't really care about quality or erotica for that matter. He's strictly interested to feed his fetishes and self humiliation. In other words anon, you're a wimp.
sorry white guys, lw makes you all seem pathetic
Loving wives is pretty much fantasizing your husband as pathetic, and there isn't anything they can do about it. Only single men, and black men are superior. Once a man becomes married, his dick shrinks, and he doesn't know how to use it. Even though are books out there like the multiple orgasmic man that any guy can purchase and last for hours in bed. Lord help us, if husbands find a way to satisfy a woman once he is married. Somehow he can't use the internet to improve and learn. Nope, he has to be a pathetic white husband. Also, he will never cheat on his wife, and he is always devoted to her. I feel lucky that I am a part of the younger generation, who can adapt and learn. It took me a month, but any guy can learn to be multiple orgasmic. It is hard work to practice, but hey you get to play with your little buddy and bond. Learn tantra sex to also. L-arginine and vitamin e can help improve erections and make them last longer. TLiving a healthy lifestyle can increase blood flow and give better erections. Letting go of anxiety and stress, can make you last longer. Geez, the wealth of information out there is staggering, and to bad people aren't using it. What man wouldn't want to go on for hours. Once men learn more about this, it will help out there sex life. Also, once men lose the fear of losing their wives, and let go of attachment, and find happiness within, bonds that shackles them to someone goes out the window. Having the power to walk away is powerful. My marine friend, who got cheated on left his ex, and guess what he found someone better. Ex is pathetic on trying to get him back. Cuckolds have a fear of losing their wives, so they put up with nearly anything. One cuckold pays alimony to support his ex-wife, her lover, and thher and lover's child. Idiot put his name on the birth certificate. women are biologically programmed to not be attracted to weak and needy guys. If these women have sons, do you think they want them to end up like their cuckold fathers. Just look at forums at cuckolds supporting the wife and her lover. What mother would want her offspring to be someone's safety net, and be used.
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!
Yes Cuckold knows from her stretched out pussy.
Only thing missing was as he pushed into her stretched hole and started fucking was the wife to ask............"are you in yet?" LOL Oh come on cuckold, you know she is hooked on real man cock now. You know full well that stud does not pull out of anything. That stud most likely filled her pussy three or four times that day. And maybe another load right into her belly as she sucked his cock.
He didn't see it...
The sad thing about this story is the husband didn't see or understand that his wife lost all the small respect she had for him. And that her respect for him is for ever lost! i don't see any other way to this story end unless in divorce or him to be for ever no man, no husband, no father, just another furniture in their house.
"Negro"?
When did this take place, 1961??? That's a really outdated term, man. Bad dog.
The word "negro"
is valid. A negro is a man of the Negroid race. That has never changed. Sure it is comes in the various "N word" varieties and has changed from colored to black to African-American (which is stupid in my opinion). In the few stories I have written I use "negro" in as a noun or adjective to add to the taboo-ness of the sex.
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