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Not as good as your others
But still a good story. Different, but good.
different
A different kind of story. Enjoyable but predictable.
;)
Awesome! ;) very creative, and a good ending at that.
WOW
I loved your story - I saw a comment saying not as good as your others? - looks like ill have to check those out too!
meh
u need to work on the dialog a big, it doesnt seem real.
I liked it.
It was somewhat hastily written, but it was a good story nonetheless. You've given me some ideas how to write an erotic horror story myself since it's not a genre I've ever tried, and for that I gave you 5 stars.
Thanks Jessy19!
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