Beautifull written hot anal story!
a sequel would be nice
Damn nice start to a writing career. Keep writing. Love to hear about when she comes to his hotel.
God damn. So fucking hot. Public anal... That's on the to do list for me
Nice read! Good sex, likeable characters - just what I like in a story!
Great job, hit a lot of beats that work for me. I'm looking forward to your future work
You described your male character as if he looked like Where's Waldo. You described your female character as if she looked like the bumble bee from Blind Melon's "No Rain." I couldn't stop cracking up when they started having awkward sex with weird dialogue. My ribs are actually sore from it. So, Thanx.
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Beautifull written hot anal story!
good story
a sequel would be nice
Got me hard
Damn nice start to a writing career. Keep writing. Love to hear about when she comes to his hotel.
Amazing
God damn. So fucking hot. Public anal... That's on the to do list for me
Nice one!
Nice read! Good sex, likeable characters - just what I like in a story!
Worked on a lot of levels
Great job, hit a lot of beats that work for me. I'm looking forward to your future work
I Couldn't Stop Laughing...
You described your male character as if he looked like Where's Waldo.
You described your female character as if she looked like the bumble bee from Blind Melon's "No Rain."
I couldn't stop cracking up when they started having awkward sex with weird dialogue. My ribs are actually sore from it. So, Thanx.
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Back to Brown Coffee or
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