You write a great "burn the bitch" story and all of (gay) literotica gets bent out of shape. Well where is the complaining when some kid is molested in the incest stories or some sissy ass is slurping cum out of his loving wives ass. Give me a break you cum queers. Its a porn site with a few good writers. One Author mans up and writes a good story and every one pitches a bitch fit. Keep writing FinishTheDamStory. You should realize your doing a good job because of all the shit your taking for posting. Awesome job.
It is not so easy to get away with murder?
It is so hard that it only works two out of three times, except when it is family.
Since he is not family to the other man and was not there when it happened the chances are good that he would get away with it.
That is the big advantage of having it done by a professional instead of DIY.
by
Anonymous08/05/14
Loved It!
Love the story and loved the dialogue between him and the 2 assholes. Great job! I hate wimpy men - this was great (and I'm a woman by the way).
by
Anonymous08/05/14
Second page
"Jake?" the voice cried out from the room down the hall. "Is everything okay?"
I took another swig of Jim Beam Black and sauntered down the hall.
"Yeah, everything is good," I said, removing my shirt. "Better than good, actually. It's finally over. We can finally be together. For good."
I stood at the foot of my bed and took my pants down, admiring the smooth contours of the naked body on my bed. My rock-hard cock sprung forth as I lowered my tighty-whities to the floor and seductively crawled between my lover's legs.
I smiled and emitted an animal-like growl and felt a shudder beneath me. I took his bulging cock in my hand and plunged my mouth over it in one smooth motion. With rabid lust, I bobbed my mouth over his cock again and again, savoring the way it filled my mouth so completely.
"Are you going to let me fuck you in the ass?" my lover asked, breathlessly, "or will you finish me by hand?"
I stroked his entire length with my tongue and mouth, gagging myself with each and every thrust. At last, I felt his cock expand and I was rewarded with a flood of hot cum. I hungrily swallowed each and every spurt and milked his cock for each and every drop.
I removed him from my mouth and wiped the saliva with the back of my hand.
"Nope," I said with a smile, "I'll take option three."
There, I've finished the damn story. You're welcome.
Good effort. I look forward to more original work from you. Pay no attention to all the cuck lovers. They feed off of humiliation and troll just to get the return fire. It gets them all stiff.
first, i enjoy your story endings... even if it's not what 'i' would do, there are lots of dangling plots here and having some stitched up makes for entertaining reading and what if games.
second, great independent work. i hope to see more of both, going forward.
ignore the haters, as i'm sure you already know... being able to tell a cogent interesting story in one page, a 'flash' submission if you will, is not easy.
Wait, what's that? Someone put up a story elsewhere in this section about a couple engaging in a non-monogamous or consensual bdsm/humiliation relationship? GAAAAHHHH!! KILL THEM!! RAPE THEIR FAMILIES!! SO MUCH RAGE!!!!
*clears throat*
But seriously, don't take stories so seriously. It's not like the story encourages violence or illegal activities or anything. It's /nothing/ like all those stories where guys might like a sexual fetish, those are the real problem on this porn site!
by
Anonymous08/06/14
Applause
For this story and for the anon who has a knack for the Gay Male category
H.D.K.'s sort of right. I mean can't we all get along, but honestly I had a head cold before I read this, and now I'm well!
Gosh, wouldn't have been great if our protagonist got mad because he wouldn't be allowed to slurp the other guys semen from her twat. Hey let's all share!
I thought this was an incomplete story, and that's kind of odd for a guy whose name is 'Finish the Damn Story'. I got the anger, and I got the revenge, but the question we ask ourselves is why? Was our protagonist ignoring her, and she felt the need to have another guy use his dipstick on her? Did our hero have a tiny pecker? Was she a nymphomaniac? Had she become an art lover? Why? Damn it why? Come on FinishTheDamnStory finish the damn story!
By the way I gave it a five because I'm hoping it pissed off a lot of the happy cuckolds.
HDK has used Beatles lyrics to title and frame many of his stories. I think Toby Keith would be a great alternative. He's got some great music. Think about some of them...
I very much enjoy your wordsmithing and imagination no matter whether you are rescuing an incomplete story or spinning a yarn or smashing a fast flash. Great work.
Thank you for your deliverance of so much pleasure.
...I suppose as a power trip ego fantasy it could be considered fun. As writing and plot, though, tedious. Not a single character is an authentic person, and why is this even in this category anyway?
Waste f time.
by
Anonymous08/14/14
Brilliant!
This is the type of story that puts a spring in my step and a song in my heart. PLease please please write some more of this stuff. I just love it when the wife and lover get theirs in this manner. 5 stars because i can't give it 500 stars. And please ignore the tree hugging cuck wimps who think we should be all civil and just talk about it.
Thank you FTDS! Another great read from you. Buckets of stars.
by
Anonymous09/07/14
As Clint Eastwood Would Say
Bravo!!! Another brilliant story. I won,t add the "Old man" bit because I think we are both about the same age!.
by
Anonymous09/13/14
Stupid story only a sick mind or muslim extreemest could like..
Oh yes, right. Guns and bullets and violence are always the answer. Yes I know she was not killed, but what she had thrust upon her was extreme violence or the threat of it.
Every day 4 women in the USA die at their hands of their husbands or significant other (FBI Statistic). Stories such as this reinforce the thought that a man is within his rights to use extreme violence in cases of adultery. It is insanity, and for an author to write such stories reinforces the idea that to commit violence against a woman can be justifiable, but in reality it only increases the level of violence in our culture. To see the favorable comments about the story is sickening. The closest thing I can liken it to is a video showing the Taliban executing a woman accused of adultery while men applaud and her children can be heard crying in the distance.
You are better than this Mr. "Finnish the Damn Story".
Emotional injury has... unknown results. Cheating is apparently considered by psychiatrists as being an emotional injury on par with losing a loved one.
It's not right, but people really should understand the POSSIBLE consequences of their actions. Especially when they harm a loved one so egregiously.
Now if our society ACTUALLY wanted to stop the violence against cheating spouses they'd end this stupidity known as "No Fault" divorce and would actually start judging the spouses based on their adherence to their contract (which a Marriage is) like all other contracts.
If only things like this could be true. The way our legal system is, we sometimes have to handle things to the best of our ability. A fine finish. Thank You!
by
Anonymous09/28/14
IF it were only true
justice is served, not unserved as thru the justice system.
5 stars, although bit far fetched. still the intent is good.
no rag head butt fuckers need apply.
Finally, a story not written by a loser with cock-envy! No bullshit, no apologies, no wimps, and NO FUCKING RETARDED RECONCILIATION WRITTEN BY EMASCULATED LOSERS THAT THINK THEY ARE A MODERN DAY SHAKESPEARE!
So, thank you for restoring my faith in mankind!
And thanks for 'Finishing the damn story'!
by
Anonymous11/11/14
dang
one of this authors best, inhop. I gave it a 4, very close to a 5.
Very interesting and inventive writing. In spite of its brevity, this story smacked home. It could be interesting to see a sequel to this scenario. I gave it a five.
by
Anonymous12/13/14
on the rare occasion
justice is served.
4 stars cause it too short for 5 stars.
The lover's suffering ends awfully quickly. Also, should he have gone home alone instead of being somewhere with witnesses? Now he's the last person seen with a man who's been shot to death.
It is all as expected (or at least it should have been)
Dear FTDS,
You have cultivated an eager following. All of us looking forward to seeing the next morsel submitted because it will answer the unanswered, resolve the unresolved, or just fill in the missing details, each of these stories left behind being abandoned by others along this literary highway. They/we/I have become so used to following the links to the lingering and languishing story that inspired your missive that to just read a stand alone story seemed to be missing an important component. I even found myself wondering if I should find and read valeriahart's Karen and Mark bar meet up scene.
But, I stopped myself, because you said this was intended as a single submission, not as a chapter 02 to someone else's chapter 01.
English
Whats the big deal!!
You write a great "burn the bitch" story and all of (gay) literotica gets bent out of shape. Well where is the complaining when some kid is molested in the incest stories or some sissy ass is slurping cum out of his loving wives ass. Give me a break you cum queers. Its a porn site with a few good writers. One Author mans up and writes a good story and every one pitches a bitch fit. Keep writing FinishTheDamStory. You should realize your doing a good job because of all the shit your taking for posting. Awesome job.
not so easy to get away with murder ?
It is not so easy to get away with murder?
It is so hard that it only works two out of three times, except when it is family.
Since he is not family to the other man and was not there when it happened the chances are good that he would get away with it.
That is the big advantage of having it done by a professional instead of DIY.
Loved It!
Love the story and loved the dialogue between him and the 2 assholes. Great job! I hate wimpy men - this was great (and I'm a woman by the way).
Second page
"Jake?" the voice cried out from the room down the hall. "Is everything okay?"
I took another swig of Jim Beam Black and sauntered down the hall.
"Yeah, everything is good," I said, removing my shirt. "Better than good, actually. It's finally over. We can finally be together. For good."
I stood at the foot of my bed and took my pants down, admiring the smooth contours of the naked body on my bed. My rock-hard cock sprung forth as I lowered my tighty-whities to the floor and seductively crawled between my lover's legs.
I smiled and emitted an animal-like growl and felt a shudder beneath me. I took his bulging cock in my hand and plunged my mouth over it in one smooth motion. With rabid lust, I bobbed my mouth over his cock again and again, savoring the way it filled my mouth so completely.
"Are you going to let me fuck you in the ass?" my lover asked, breathlessly, "or will you finish me by hand?"
I stroked his entire length with my tongue and mouth, gagging myself with each and every thrust. At last, I felt his cock expand and I was rewarded with a flood of hot cum. I hungrily swallowed each and every spurt and milked his cock for each and every drop.
I removed him from my mouth and wiped the saliva with the back of my hand.
"Nope," I said with a smile, "I'll take option three."
There, I've finished the damn story. You're welcome.
Pretty Brainless
Enough said
Enjoyed it
Good effort. I look forward to more original work from you. Pay no attention to all the cuck lovers. They feed off of humiliation and troll just to get the return fire. It gets them all stiff.
Nice!
first, i enjoy your story endings... even if it's not what 'i' would do, there are lots of dangling plots here and having some stitched up makes for entertaining reading and what if games.
second, great independent work. i hope to see more of both, going forward.
ignore the haters, as i'm sure you already know... being able to tell a cogent interesting story in one page, a 'flash' submission if you will, is not easy.
continued success, and thanks!
Guys! It's just a story, so calm down...
Wait, what's that? Someone put up a story elsewhere in this section about a couple engaging in a non-monogamous or consensual bdsm/humiliation relationship? GAAAAHHHH!! KILL THEM!! RAPE THEIR FAMILIES!! SO MUCH RAGE!!!!
*clears throat*
But seriously, don't take stories so seriously. It's not like the story encourages violence or illegal activities or anything. It's /nothing/ like all those stories where guys might like a sexual fetish, those are the real problem on this porn site!
Applause
For this story and for the anon who has a knack for the Gay Male category
Hey wow...
H.D.K.'s sort of right. I mean can't we all get along, but honestly I had a head cold before I read this, and now I'm well!
Gosh, wouldn't have been great if our protagonist got mad because he wouldn't be allowed to slurp the other guys semen from her twat. Hey let's all share!
I thought this was an incomplete story, and that's kind of odd for a guy whose name is 'Finish the Damn Story'. I got the anger, and I got the revenge, but the question we ask ourselves is why? Was our protagonist ignoring her, and she felt the need to have another guy use his dipstick on her? Did our hero have a tiny pecker? Was she a nymphomaniac? Had she become an art lover? Why? Damn it why? Come on FinishTheDamnStory finish the damn story!
By the way I gave it a five because I'm hoping it pissed off a lot of the happy cuckolds.
Oh by the way...
HDK has used Beatles lyrics to title and frame many of his stories. I think Toby Keith would be a great alternative. He's got some great music. Think about some of them...
Marvelous
I very much enjoy your wordsmithing and imagination no matter whether you are rescuing an incomplete story or spinning a yarn or smashing a fast flash. Great work.
Thank you for your deliverance of so much pleasure.
Wonderful!
Just continue writing.
I enjoy and appreciate yr creations very much
Eh...
...I suppose as a power trip ego fantasy it could be considered fun. As writing and plot, though, tedious. Not a single character is an authentic person, and why is this even in this category anyway?
Waste f time.
Brilliant!
This is the type of story that puts a spring in my step and a song in my heart. PLease please please write some more of this stuff. I just love it when the wife and lover get theirs in this manner. 5 stars because i can't give it 500 stars. And please ignore the tree hugging cuck wimps who think we should be all civil and just talk about it.
Five Stars!
Excellent! TTB forever.
thanks
Thanks for the entertainment. I enjoy your stories. keep them comming.
Mike from Texas
Thanks FTDS!
A Galaxy of stars!
About time!! ;)
Thank you FTDS! Another great read from you. Buckets of stars.
As Clint Eastwood Would Say
Bravo!!! Another brilliant story. I won,t add the "Old man" bit because I think we are both about the same age!.
Stupid story only a sick mind or muslim extreemest could like..
Oh yes, right. Guns and bullets and violence are always the answer. Yes I know she was not killed, but what she had thrust upon her was extreme violence or the threat of it.
Every day 4 women in the USA die at their hands of their husbands or significant other (FBI Statistic). Stories such as this reinforce the thought that a man is within his rights to use extreme violence in cases of adultery. It is insanity, and for an author to write such stories reinforces the idea that to commit violence against a woman can be justifiable, but in reality it only increases the level of violence in our culture. To see the favorable comments about the story is sickening. The closest thing I can liken it to is a video showing the Taliban executing a woman accused of adultery while men applaud and her children can be heard crying in the distance.
You are better than this Mr. "Finnish the Damn Story".
"Grieving over a murdered friend in MN"
@Anon
Emotional injury has... unknown results. Cheating is apparently considered by psychiatrists as being an emotional injury on par with losing a loved one.
It's not right, but people really should understand the POSSIBLE consequences of their actions. Especially when they harm a loved one so egregiously.
Now if our society ACTUALLY wanted to stop the violence against cheating spouses they'd end this stupidity known as "No Fault" divorce and would actually start judging the spouses based on their adherence to their contract (which a Marriage is) like all other contracts.
Enjoyable!
If only things like this could be true. The way our legal system is, we sometimes have to handle things to the best of our ability. A fine finish. Thank You!
IF it were only true
justice is served, not unserved as thru the justice system.
5 stars, although bit far fetched. still the intent is good.
no rag head butt fuckers need apply.
totally pointless
Like watching someone use a sledgehammer to crush (crush, not crack) a walnut...
nice
a bit off the cuff, but nice.
Refreshing
Finally, a story not written by a loser with cock-envy! No bullshit, no apologies, no wimps, and NO FUCKING RETARDED RECONCILIATION WRITTEN BY EMASCULATED LOSERS THAT THINK THEY ARE A MODERN DAY SHAKESPEARE!
So, thank you for restoring my faith in mankind!
And thanks for 'Finishing the damn story'!
dang
one of this authors best, inhop. I gave it a 4, very close to a 5.
Wooooowww! Friends in low places?
Very interesting and inventive writing. In spite of its brevity, this story smacked home. It could be interesting to see a sequel to this scenario. I gave it a five.
on the rare occasion
justice is served.
4 stars cause it too short for 5 stars.
My issues with this
The lover's suffering ends awfully quickly. Also, should he have gone home alone instead of being somewhere with witnesses? Now he's the last person seen with a man who's been shot to death.
Thats how cheating wife stories should end, None of this I love when Im a pussy BS
It is all as expected (or at least it should have been)
Dear FTDS,
You have cultivated an eager following. All of us looking forward to seeing the next morsel submitted because it will answer the unanswered, resolve the unresolved, or just fill in the missing details, each of these stories left behind being abandoned by others along this literary highway. They/we/I have become so used to following the links to the lingering and languishing story that inspired your missive that to just read a stand alone story seemed to be missing an important component. I even found myself wondering if I should find and read valeriahart's Karen and Mark bar meet up scene.
But, I stopped myself, because you said this was intended as a single submission, not as a chapter 02 to someone else's chapter 01.
Please offer us more original creative works.
If you write it
they will read it.
ta
A MANS HOME MAY BE HIS CASTLE
but it is not secure from outside brigands, TK U MLJ LV NV
get real
this isn't even good fiction
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