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Another great chapter...
Another great chapter adding to such a good story. I'm enjoying every chapter and looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
Outstanding!
I am enjoying this story of yours. As of this moment, you are my new favorite author. Watching for new chapters. Thanks!
Holy fuck!!
That was a good scare!! Loved it!
Seems to me that next chapter will be the taking of Emmatel, really can't put that off anymore I think...
A good story!
Your writing reads like a Robert Howard story. To be told around a campfire at night. Please continue. These castaways make a great story!
fukking yesss
I want More!!!!!!! this my drug!!
Awesome!
Awesome story so far, keep up the great work.
Loke, Sweden
as always
another scintillating minute of escape...*sigh* how I wish it were complete and I could read it front to back in one sitting...
Intense!
Well done on a tense and satisfying chapter!
Jason
publish it
do another round or two of editing out of general principle, add a few dozen pages if you feel its needed and publish on amazon. it will sell and is far better than lot of stuff already being published there.
Agree with previous
Could definitely sell. Just a little extra TLC and ready to go. :-D
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