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A New World

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/06/14

Pretty Interesting

I think this was a really good story! Honestly I wanted more. If there was a book based off of this I'd read it. Nice work. (:

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by Anonymous08/06/14

could have been

Maybe with some proof reading you would have something here lmao,,,
Not sure what or who wrote this,, sounds like a 6 year old had a major hand in it
( Her body perfectly matched her body. )
( Linda licked her lips and look his cock between her lips. )
Couldnt finish it,, after she look his cock between her lips that was it for me
LLP

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