No build-up of erotic tension - no explanation of who, why (and where). Just a sad projection of a (fat) girl with the miscompetition that she gets (self)respect from being a cheap lay - and being taken advantage of as such....
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Totally unexciting
No build-up of erotic tension - no explanation of who, why (and where).
Just a sad projection of a (fat) girl with the miscompetition that she gets (self)respect from being a cheap lay - and being taken advantage of as such....
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