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Heidi Beside The River

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by Anonymous08/05/14

Totally unexciting

No build-up of erotic tension - no explanation of who, why (and where).
Just a sad projection of a (fat) girl with the miscompetition that she gets (self)respect from being a cheap lay - and being taken advantage of as such....

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by Sandman831407/17/15

Maybe unexciting

This story is only partly fictional. Heidi didn't need or want much build-up. She was hot to trot before she came down to the river. She was hot to trot 24/7, and shagged a few dozen men and boys as often as she could get one alone.
She had no clue that I had been shagging two of her friends. She thought that she was breaking me in; that she was my first piece of pussy. And that she was taking advantage of me!
I really believed, and still do, that she got her self-respect from getting laid regularly and often.

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