Love my wife's stories enough said...
Dialogue works best with quotation marks, not colons.
I'll comment and rate in the end. Let's see what happen and how it happen.
Congrats!!! Continue soon please ;)
This was a good start to what could be a hot series. Looking forward to the next installment.
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Love my wife's stories enough said...
Tense? Punctuation?
Dialogue works best with quotation marks, not colons.
a 3 * to see what happen...
I'll comment and rate in the end. Let's see what happen and how it happen.
Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats!!!
Continue soon please ;)
Good Start
This was a good start to what could be a hot series. Looking forward to the next installment.
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