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Breathing Underwater

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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh908/07/14

nice illustration but

holdin' breath is easier than breathin' underwater ??!

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by JWren08/14/14

One and only

Yes, some things you can only do once. So simple and subtle, I almost choked. Nice one!

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by Anonymous08/17/14

Haiku!

First off, it's funny. Second of all, this reminds me of Haiku...except it makes a whole lot more sense! :-)

Sincerely, Payenbrant

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by HoneyAdored10/02/14

And you...

...Lived to tell the tale.
Made me smile and titter!

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by Anonymous06/07/15

Sometimes I dream...
I breathe underwater
I tried it once with that love first found
I awoke in terror because
I saw myself...
I saw myself that I was drowned

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